资源描述:
《人物描写的写作课.pptx》由会员上传分享,免费在线阅读,更多相关内容在教育资源-天天文库。
1、巩义初中英语坊示范课例英语人物写作微课堂巩义第四初级中学牛伟利中考英语作文评分标准满分档(15分):长度符合要求(80-90字),书写规范,涵盖所有要点,结构规范,条理清楚,逻辑严密,词汇丰富,没有任何语法错误。第五档(12-14分):文本长度符合要求,书写规范,涵盖所有要点,结构规范,条理清楚,逻辑严密,词汇比较丰富有少量语法错误。第四档(9-11分):文本长度符合要求,书写规范,基本涵盖要点(有2要点得给9-10分),行文比较连贯,词汇不够丰富,有一些语法错误。第三档(6-8分):文本长度与要求有明显距离,书写不规范,要点不完整(只有1个要
2、点),行文不连贯,词汇量不足,错误较多,勉强能看出作文意图。第二档(3-5分):能用句子表达,错误百出,只能勉强猜测出作文意图。第一档(0-2分):有一些英语单词,但与话题毫不相干。(白卷0分)一、学习目标1.通过小组合作复习,温故有关人物介绍的词汇与句型。2.通过连词成句,从外貌、职业、性格、能力等方面介绍某个人物并成文二.学习重点和难点能运用所学的词汇与句型从外貌、职业、性格、能力等方面介绍某个人物并成文。hobbypersonjobabilityageappearanceachievementfutureplanpersonalityWh
3、atcanwewriteaboutaperson?WorkingroupsListsomewords,phrasesorsentencesappearance:short,tall,thin,ofmediumheight,strong,good-looking,nice,slimhavelong/short,straight/curlyblackhairhobby:like/love/befondof/enjoyreading/playingbasketball...personality:lazy,quiet,friendly,shy,hel
4、pful,polite,hard-working,patient,outgoingfutureplan:wanttobea…when...growup,hopetobe…,/...dreamistobe…ability:begoodat/dowellinMaths,canlearnthingsquickly,beabletorepaircomputersCollection:Introduceyouselfappearance:IamofmeidumheightIamthinandIhavelongstraighthair.hobby:Ilov
5、eplayingbasketball.personality:IamoutgoingandIlikemakingfriends.futureplan:IwanttobeabasketballplayerwhenIgrowup.ability:IamgoodatEnglishandIalsoplaythepianowell.MynameisTom,Iamofmeidumheight.IamthinandIhavelongstraighthair.Iloveplayingbasketball,andIplayiteverday.Iamoutging
6、andIlikemakingfriends.IwanttobeabasketballplayerwhenIgrowup.IwillpracticebasketballeverydayandtrymybesttobeaprefessionalplayerlikeYaoMinginthefuture.IamgoodatEnglishandIalsoplaythepianowell.Howcanwewriteapassageaboutaperson?根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语文章介绍你的好朋友,词数70字左右。要点提示:1.Hisorherlook
7、s(hair,height,build);2.Hisorherlikesanddislikes;3.Hisorherpersonalcharacter.Step1.ExaminethetitleBeginningMainbodyEndingWhoisshe/he?1.Hisorherlooks(hair,height,build);2.Hisorherlikesanddislikes3.Hisorherpersonalcharacter(shy,friendly,kind...)Whatdoyouthinkofhimorher?/Whatisy
8、ouropinion?Step2.Makeanoutline:listsomekeywordsandsentencestructures:Sample