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1、Withthiscoverletter,wewillsubmittherevisedmanuscript(acp-2010-399)entitled,“Relatingtropicaloceancloudstomoistprocessesusingwatervaporisotopemeasurements”forpublicationinAtmosphericChemistryandPhysics.Wewouldliketothankrefereesforthecarefulandconstructivereviews.Basedthecommentsfromthere

2、ferees,wehavemadechangesofthemanuscript,whicharedetailedbelow.ReplytotheevaluationbythesecondrefereeThisreviewerpointedouttwothings.Webelievethesetwopointsarerelevanttocommentsfromfirstreviewerandfollowinghis/herminorcomments.1.Table1:Isitvalidtoshowthenumberoflowersensitivitydata?(Speci

3、fically,BLCandPCdatafor850-500hPa)Answer:Thispointisrelatedtoouranswertothefirstreferee.PleaseseeourresponsesandAppendixtothefirstreviewerabove.2.Figure1:Whatarethemultiplelinesinthesamecolors?Answer:ThemultiplelinesinthesamecoloraremultipleprofileobservationsinoneTESRunID(5889)exceptpre

4、cipitatingclouds(ThreeRunIDs,5889,5918and5948wereneedtoplotmultipleprofileobservations).3.Figure2:Latitude/Longitudeinformationshouldbeadded.Isthisasnapshot?Ifso,thedateshouldbespecified.Answer:Weaddthedateinthefigurecaption.Thegeographicalinformationwasalreadypresentedintheoriginalmanus

5、cript.4.Figure3:Timeinformationshouldbespecifiedinthecaption.WhyCOD/CTPandH2O/dDhavedifferentsamplingfrequencies?Howcanthereaderknowaboutthecloudtypesduringthistimeseries?Answer:InFig.3,cloudproperties(aandb)andwatervapor(candd)havedifferentsamplingfrequenciesbecausewesampledcloudycondit

6、ionsforFig.3(a)and(b).Weaddasentenceinfigurecaption.5.Figure4:Isitasnapshot?Seasonalmeanforasingleyear?Climatology?Pleaseclarify.Answer:WementionedsamplingperiodinSection2.2.Isotopiccompositionofwatervapor(δD).Itisnotasnapshot.Itisaseasonalmeanvalue(JunetoAugust,JJA)fromJune2005toAugust2

7、008.6.Abstract:Ithasbeentoldbymanythatthevapor-dDrelationshipiscontrolledbynotonlyRayleighprocessbutalsoothernon-Rayleighprocesses,butnoneofthemhasquantifiedthesignificance.Isitstillimpossibleinthisstudy?1Answer:Itisagoodpoint.Oneofthesimplestmodelsforatmosphericwatervapo