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1、ESLWritingModelAnswerAnalysisWeek9Exercise6Recentlyyouwereinvitedtoanimportantfamilycelebrationheldinanothertown.Unfortunatelyyouweredelayedonthejourneyandarrivedlate.Writealettertoafriendexplainingwhathappened.Yourlettershouldbeabout150-200wordslong.Don’tforgettoinclude:w
2、hythecelebrationwasbeingheldwhatkindofproblemyouhadonthejourneywhathappenedintheend.Youwillreceiveupto9marksforthecontentofyourletter,andupto9marksforthestyleandaccuracyofyourlanguage.ModelanswerJustaquicklinetotellyouwhathasbeenhappeninghere.Myunclehasbeenmanagerofatoyfac
3、toryfortwentyyearsandheretiredlastweek.Hiscompanygaveabigpartyforhim,tothankhimandcelebratedhisretirement.Familymemberswereinvitedtoo.Unfortunately,onthewaytothepartyanothercarcrashedintous!Wehadstoppedtoletawomanwithapushchaircrosstheroad,anothercarcameroundthecornertoofa
4、standthedrivercouldn’tstopintime.Luckily,noonewashurt---justabitshaken.I’mgladIwaswearingmyseatbelt,Icantellyou!However,thebackofDad’scarwasreallysmashedup.Thedriverreluctantlyagreedtopayforthedamageandwecontinuedourjourneybytaxi.ModelanswerWearrivedatthepartytothesoundofc
5、heeringasmyunclewentontotheplatformtomakehisretirementspeech.Weweresogladwemadeitintime.Writetomesoonandletmeknowallyournews.Exercise7Yourlocalnewspaperisleadingacampaigntoopenapostofficeinyourvillage,whichwillalsoprovideinternetandinternationaltelephonefacilitiesforthecom
6、munity.Theeditorhasaskedpeopletowritetothenewspapersayingwhethertheysupportthisidea.Herearesomeofthecommentsreceived:Exercise7‘It’salongwalktothenearestpostofficeatpresent.’‘We’relookingforwardtobeingabletobuystampsandsendparcelsfromourownvillage.’‘Ihaven’tgotacomputeratho
7、meandI’dliketobeabletousetheinternetforinformationandcommunication.’‘Itwillcauseallsortsofproblems---peoplewillcrowdintouseitanddroprubbisheverywhere.’‘Itwillcreateseveralnewjobsinthevillage,whichwereallyneed.’Exercise7Writealettertothenewspapergivingyourviewsabouttheidea.
8、Yourlettershouldbeabout150-200wordslong.Beginyourletter‘DearEditor’.Donotwriteanaddress.T
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