段落的展开---如何做到论述的具体和充分.ppt

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1、段落的展开---如何做到论述的具体和充分以2011年6月四级作文onlineshopping为例范文一Nowadayswiththeeverrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shoppingontheinternethasbeenafashionespeciallyamongtheyoungsters.Onlineshoppinghasmadeourdailylifemoreconvenientandcomfortable.Forexampl

2、e,shoppingontheinternetcansavestudentsagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandstore,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.Theinternethasshortenthedistancebetweenmanufacturersandconsumersandthuswecanevenbuygoodsinothercountries.Ontheotherhand,lac

3、kofthefacetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.What’smore，thedeliverywillincreasetheriskofitems’damage.Inmyopinion,shoppingontheinternetisairreversibletrend.Moreandmorepeoplewillbeaccustomedtoit.Itwillbemuchmorepopularinthenearfuture.Andatthesametimewes

4、houldtakesomemeasurestomakeitperfect.具体而充分地展开段落---第1段Nowadayswiththeeverrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shoppingontheinternethasbeenafashionespeciallyamongtheyoungsters.在现象陈述中，捎带原因分析（informationtechnology)因果分析法提及了网购的主要人群，即青少年。举例法从general到

5、specific具体而充分地展开段落---第2段Onlineshoppinghasmadeourdailylifemoreconvenientandcomfortable.Forexample,shoppingontheinternetcansavestudentsagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandstore,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.Theinternethasshortenthedist

6、ancebetweenmanufacturersandconsumersandthuswecanevenbuygoodsinothercountries.Ontheotherhand,lackofthefacetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.What’smore，thedeliverywillincreasetheriskofitems’damage.主题句之后，用举例法（学生网购节省时间专注于课业）来充分论述；自然过渡到第二种具体的网购便利：跨国网购话题转向

7、网购的不利之处，仍然有二。两者都很简练，但不失具体（没有当面交易的保障，投送过程中的货物损坏）另，几个关联词使上下文无论是递进、转折，还是举例都过渡自然，衔接得当从general到specific具体而充分地展开段落---第3段Inmyopinion,shoppingontheinternetisairreversibletrend.Moreandmorepeoplewillbeaccustomedtoit.Itwillbemuchmorepopularinthenearfuture.Andatthesametimeweshouldtak

8、esomemeasurestomakeitperfect.结尾：个人观点的陈述是温和中立型------肯定其存在的合理性，同时提出需要改进的地方。作为结尾，概括性强一点会有一定的高度。不可抵挡