段落的展开如何做到论述的具体和充分

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1、段落的展开---如何做到论述的具体和充分以2011年6月四级作文onlineshopping为例范文一Nowadayswiththeeverrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shoppingontheinternethasbeenafashionespeciallyamongtheyoungsters.Onlineshoppinghasmadeourdailylifemoreconvenientandcomfortable.Forexample,shoppingontheinternet

2、cansavestudentsagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandstore,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.Theinternethasshortenthedistancebetweenmanufacturersandconsumersandthuswecanevenbuygoodsinothercountries.Ontheotherhand,lackofthefacetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessrel

3、iableandtrustworthy.What’smore，thedeliverywillincreasetheriskofitems’damage.Inmyopinion,shoppingontheinternetisairreversibletrend.Moreandmorepeoplewillbeaccustomedtoit.Itwillbemuchmorepopularinthenearfuture.Andatthesametimeweshouldtakesomemeasurestomakeitperfect.具体而充分地展开段落---第1段Nowadayswiththee

4、verrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shoppingontheinternethasbeenafashionespeciallyamongtheyoungsters.在现象陈述中，捎带原因分析（informationtechnology)因果分析法提及了网购的主要人群，即青少年。举例法从general到specific具体而充分地展开段落---第2段Onlineshoppinghasmadeourdailylifemoreconvenientandcomfortable.Forexa

5、mple,shoppingontheinternetcansavestudentsagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandstore,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.Theinternethasshortenthedistancebetweenmanufacturersandconsumersandthuswecanevenbuygoodsinothercountries.Ontheotherhand,lackofthefacetofacedeal

6、makesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.What’smore，thedeliverywillincreasetheriskofitems’damage.主题句之后，用举例法（学生网购节省时间专注于课业）来充分论述；自然过渡到第二种具体的网购便利：跨国网购话题转向网购的不利之处，仍然有二。两者都很简练，但不失具体（没有当面交易的保障，投送过程中的货物损坏）另，几个关联词使上下文无论是递进、转折，还是举例都过渡自然，衔接得当从general到specific具体而充分地展开段落---第3段Inmyopinion,shoppingonth

7、einternetisairreversibletrend.Moreandmorepeoplewillbeaccustomedtoit.Itwillbemuchmorepopularinthenearfuture.Andatthesametimeweshouldtakesomemeasurestomakeitperfect.结尾：个人观点的陈述是温和中立型------肯定其存在的合理性，同时提出需要改进的地方。作为结尾，概括性强一点会有一定的高度。不可抵挡