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1、......TEM4新题型写作题型变化：Previously：陈述观点——论证观点——得出结论Now：概括材料——提出观点并论证观点——得出结论（重申观点或提出建议）材料作文Tactics：1.仔细审题，分析材料（2-3mins）2.列出提纲，确定布局（3-4mins）Para.1.引出话题，概括材料（summarize，paraphrase）Para.2.提出自身观点，列出理由论证Para.3.重申观点或提出建议3.正式写作（30-35mins）4.检查并优化（2-3mins）评分标准如何总结材料第一段：Describethephenomenon/
2、introducethediscussedtopic+opinionsfrombothsides/summarizeorparaphrasethetopicsentencesintheexcerpt.参考范文 WithIntelligentMachinestoDotheThinking,WillOurBrainsGetLazy?参考材料......Nowadays,manyaspectsofpeople’sdailylifehaveundergoneconsiderablechangesbecauseoftherecentdevelopmentin
3、artificialintelligence.Obviously,artificialintelligencehasalreadycompletelyrenovatedpeople’slifestyle.Ontheonehand,thecontributionofartificialintelligencetothesocietyisprominentandpeople’sdependenceonitisanirreversibletrend.Peopleenjoythebenefitsandconveniencebroughtbyintellige
4、ntmachines.Ontheotherhand,peoplearestillconcernedaboutitsnegativeimpact,forexample,whetherourbrainswillregresswithintelligentmachinestodothethinking.第二段：先表明自己观点Stance:asfarasI’mconcerned,astome,frommyperspective,inmyview,personallyspeaking,frommypointofview再分条论证（灵活运用连接词）1.First
5、andforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast2.First,second,third3.Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,lastbutnotleast参考材料......1.Initially,besides,furthermore,lastbutnotleast范文：Inmyopinion,artificialintelligencewillenableourbrainstogetmorecreative.Admittedly,alotofworkhasbeendonebyintellig
6、entmachines.Itseemsthatthefunctionofpeoplehasbeenweakenedandpeople‘sbrainshavebeenreplaced.Asamatteroffact,thankstointelligentmachines,peoplecanexpandtheircreativeenergyandaddnewvarieties.Simplyspeaking,whenpeoplearefreefromtedious,repetitive,sometimesevendangerouswork,workeffi
7、ciencywillundoubtedlybeimproved.Asaresult,peoplecansparemoretimetodowhattheywantandpursuewhattheydreamof,whichisthepremiseofcreativity.Moreover,creativitystemsprimarilyfromknowledgeandthinking.Oncepeoplehavetheopportunitytodomorethinkingandlearning,theirintelligencewouldbeenhan
8、cedratherthanweakened.第三段：enrichyourrestatement/expres
