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1、一、2016年专业四级写作题目概况(%1)测试要求:写一篇200个单词左右的作文,考试时间45分钟,计20分。(-)2016年专四作文评分标准:1.summary(6分)2.comments(12分)A.思想与表达(ideasandarguments)7分(满分7分,其中6-7分优秀,4・5分良好,3分一般,分较差。)(1)思想内容(content)内容切题;内容充实;观点明确;论据支持论点;有独到见解。(2)表达效果(effectiveness)表达清晰;有说服力。(3)篇章组织结构(rhetoricalorganization)每段有主题句;句间衔接自然;段间过渡自然;第一部分明确提出观
2、点;最后一部分自然得出结论;段落排列合理。B.语言运用能力(languageuse)5分(满分5分,其中5分优秀,3・4分良好,2分一般,1分较差。)(1)准确性(correctness)语法正确;句子结构正确;固定搭配正确;用词准确。(2)丰富性(richness)词汇丰富;句子形式多样。(3)得体性(appropriateness)语气恰当;语言地道。3•写作规范mechanics(2分)(满分2分,其中2分优秀,1.5分良好,1分一般,0.5分较差)单词拼写正确;标点符号正确;大小写正确;书写美观;卷而整洁。范文1Whenitcomestowhetherparentsshouldtak
3、etheirchildrentospendholidaysduringterm-time,viewsontheissuevaryfrompersontoperson.(引入话题)Parentsclaimthatbydoingso,theycansavealotofmoneybornofbusyschoolholidays.Educationalofficialsstronglyopposethistendencyonthegroundthatitencouragestruancy,whichinturndamagesachild'seducation.(两种观点)Asaresult,UKe
4、ducationauthoritiesarenowbanningparentsfromtakingtheirchildrenforholidaysduringterm-timetosavemoney.(概括材米斗)Frommyperspective,themeritsofbanningternvtimeholidaysoutweighitsdemerits.(陈述观点)Tobeginwith,takingtoughmeasuresonthiskindoftruancyisconducivetothenormalteachingprocess,oneofthekeyelementstoguar
5、anteekid'sacademicperformance.(理由一)Asweknow,currently,teachershavethediscretiontoapproveacertaintimeofabsencefromschoolforeachchild.Bydefinitelyabolishingtherightofheadteachersto"authorizeabsence5'fromtheclassroom,thoseteacherscanrarelybepesteredbyparentswhowanttotakechildrentogoonaholidayjusttosav
6、emoney,whichseverelydisruptsteachingprocess.(具体论证一)Whatmore,withoutstrictpenaltiesimposedontheparentswholeadtotheirkiefsplayingtruant,thoseparentscangraduallyviewaskingforholidayleaveasaright.(理由二)Oncethisculturalexpectationisformed,theleveloftruancywilldramaticallyincrease.(假设论证二)Accordingly,thegr
7、owingtrendofternvtimeholidaysshouldbebannedwithnodelay.(重申论点)Inthisway,teacherscanimpartknowledgewithoutdisturbanceandparentswillbedeterredfromsavingmoneyattheexpenseofsacrificingtheirkid'seducation.范文2Newr
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