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1、1.WritingPracticeDirections:Youaretowritein100---120wordsaboutthetitle“TheTwo-dayWeekend”.YoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninChinesebelow:1.双休日给大学生带来的好处。2．双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。3.我应当怎样过好双休日。TheTwo－dayweekendThetwo-dayweekendnotonlyallowsustorelax,butalsogivesu

2、sthechancetotakeupsomehobbies.However,thetwo-dayweekendhascausedafewproblems.Themostseriousoneisthattheweekdaysarefilledwithtoomanylessons.Becauseourclassesarelimitedto5days,MondaythroughFriday,wehavetotakemorelessonseachdaythaninthepast.Thisleavesuslittletimetocat

3、chourbreathduringtheweekdays.Inordertobenefitmostfromthetwo-dayweekend,Ihavedecidedtomakeagoodplanforthatrestperiod.Duringtheweekend,Iwillnotonlyrestandtakeupsomehobbies,butIwillalsosetasideenoughtimetostudy.点评：本文依照提纲展开，首段说明了双休日的种种好处，第二段段首的however转折的同时，也起了承前启后的作用，最

4、后一段说明了自己将如何过好双休日的计划。2.“HowtoDealwithCheating”.1.当今的校园里出现了各种各样的作弊手段。2.作弊的原因。3.怎样杜绝作弊。HowtoDealwithCheatingManystudentstendtocheatduringexams.Somewillcopytheanswersfromtheirbooks.Otherswillphysicallycommunicatewitheachothertogettherightanswers.Thereareevensomethatwri

5、tedowninformationontheirhandsorarms.Thereareseveralreasonsforcheating.Firstly,somestudentsjustwanttoachievehighscoreswithouthavingtoworkhard.Secondly,someareundergreatpressureandtheyarefearfuloffailingexams.Finallysomeareafraidthattheywillfallbehindothersintheexams

6、.Thereareatleasttwowaystoeliminatecheating.Onewayistoexplaintostudentsthatcheatingisharmful.Anotherwayistotakestrictmeasurestopreventcheating.点评：本文紧扣三点提纲展开讨论，每段的首句点明了该段的主题大意，结构层次一目了然，词句运用得当。3.“On-campusStudents’Marrying”.1.如何看待在校大学生结婚的问题2.国家允许在校学生结婚3.在校学生结婚对学生的影响4.

7、你的观点On-campusStudents’MarryingThereisanewdebate:IsitlegalforChineseon-campusstudentstogetmarriedbeforetheygraduate?Somepeoplesay“yes”whileotherssay“no”.Infact,thegovernmentallowson-campusstudentstogetmarriedbeforetheygraduate.Somearguethatiftheygetmarried,theirscho

8、olworkcouldbeaffectedandtheymaynotgraduate.Inmyopinion,itisunnecessarytobanon-campusstudentsfromgettingmarriedbeforetheyfinishcollege.However,its