高三英语看图作文讲评

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1、看图作文讲评2014-03-24DesignedbyAngellew2021/8/171芳芳是个好学生。请根据下面5幅图用英语写一篇短文，词数120以上.2021/8/172如果单从画面看，所得的信息无非是：一天夜里，风刮得很大。芳芳两点钟起床，赶到学校，把窗户关好后回家。如果你就按上述所看到的信息去写，肯定拿不到高分。这是篇记叙文，记叙了芳芳做好事的前后经过。但记叙离不开人。所以要根据“芳芳是个好学生”这个信息对人物展开合理的想象：FangFangisagoodstudent.Shelivesnearherschool.Thistermshewaselectedmoni

2、torofherclass.Sheisveryresponsibleforherclasswork.给下面的叙述奠定了基础。2021/8/173第一步：就事论事Thewindwasblowingheavily.2021/8/174FangFanggotuprightaway.Itwas2o’clock.2021/8/175Afterawhileshegotuptotheschool.2021/8/176Sheclosedthewindowsofherclassroom.2021/8/177Shelefttheclassroomandwenthome.2021/8/178O

3、nenight,itwasblowingoutside.ThewindstruckthewindowsoheavilythatthenoisewokeupFangFang.第二步：合理想象2021/8/179Thewindblowinginthroughtheopenwindowmadeherfeelabitcold.Sheknewaheavyrainwouldsoonarrive.Shethoughtofherclassroomagain.Shewonderedwhetherthestudentsondutyhadclosedthewindowsproperly.She

4、gotupandputonherclothes.Itwasthen2o’clock.2021/8/1710Shedecidedtogooutrightaway,andgettotheschoolbeforethestormcame.Sheopenedthedoor,andrushedoutintothedark.Ontheway,thestrongwindmadeitdifficultforhertogoforwardquickly.Inspiteofthis,sheranasfastaspossible,andafterawhileshegottotheschool.2

5、021/8/1711Shehurriedrighttoherclassroomandopenedthedoor.Oh,dear!Allthewindowswereopen,andthestrongwindfilledtheclassroomwithgreatnoise.Itwasnotatalleasyforhertoshutupallthewindows.2021/8/1712Sheturnedoffthelightandwasleavingtheclassroomwhensheturnedaroundtomakesureallthingsweredonewell.Ju

6、stthenitbegantorainheavily.Whenshegothome,itwasalreadyhalfpastthree.2021/8/1713第三步：整理成文根据合理的想象和字数限制合成一篇短文Onenight,thewindwasblowingoutsideandstruckthewindowsoheavilythatthenoisewokeupFangFang.Thewindblowinginthroughtheopenwindowmadeherfeelabitcold.Sheknewaheavyrainwouldsoonarrivewhenshewo

7、nderedwhetherthestudentsondutyhadclosedthewindowsproperly.Itwasthen2o’clockbutshetogooutrightaway,andgettotheschoolbeforethestormcame.Sheopenedthedoor,andrushedoutintothedark.Ontheway,thestrongwindmadeitdifficultforhertogoforwardquickly.Inspiteofthis,sheranasfastasp