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1、OutlineBasicrequirementHowapaperisgradedMainproblemsSamples(4,7,14)Short-cutsolutionfortheproblemAnalyzingtopic-designingtendenciesandsuggestingwritingtopics(+samples)Pointstonotice(introduction,difficultwords,longerandmore)Development/organizationSillyMistakesShiningpointsABasicRe
2、quirement1.Agoodpieceofwritingshouldhave:Unity:focusononeideaCoherence:1)goodlogic/organizations2)transitionsignalsCorrectexpressions:grammar,vocabulary,sentencestructures,etc.Richnessandexpressiveness:bonesandflesh;generalstatementsandspecificdetails;variedsentencestructures;wordi
3、ngFollowthisprocedureI.Workoutanoutline1.Introduction1)introductoryremarks2)thesisstatement2.Mainbody1)onegeneral+twosupporting/specificdetails2)onegeneral+twosupporting/specificdetails3.ConclusionII.WriteIII.ProofreadingCommonmistakes:subject-verbagreement,verbforms,there’s,therea
4、re,…Sampleorganization：Ts:Opportunitiesdonotcomeveryoften.D1:Theycomeoccasionally.D2:Theycomeandgoquietly.Cs:valueandtreatthemwithcare.Opportunitiesdonotcomeoften(TS).Theycomeonlyonceinawhile(DS1).Veryoften,theycomequietlyandgobywithoutbeingnoticed(DS2).Therefore,itisadvisablethaty
5、oushouldvalueandtreatthemwithcare.Task:elaboratethispassage.Letitgrowintoa120-wordessay.Howapaperisgraded(评分标准)阅卷标准共分为五等(0分--白卷，作文与题毫不相关，或只 有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。)2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎 或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分--基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯 性差，有较多的严重错误。8分--基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字 尚连贯，但语言错误较多。11分--切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯
6、， 但有少量语言错误。14分--切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连 贯较好，基本上无语言错误。学生的作文主要问题：第一、英语底子太薄。第二、词汇量太小，且对已学词汇记忆不清。第三、表达思想不清楚。因此分数集中在5分和8分段5分--基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯 性差，有较多的严重错误。8分--基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字 尚连贯，但语言错误较多。Sample(C-14)Whenyougototheplayground,youcanalwaysseemanyyoungstudentsplayingallkindsofsportsgames.Yes,ever
7、yonehasrealizedtheimportanceofahealthybody.Butwhenitcomestomentalhealth,noteveryoneknowsitsimportance.Wearelivinginaverycompetitiveworldwherewehavetofaceallkindsofpressuresandchallenges.Ifwedon’tknowhowtotakecareofourmentalhealth,theresultswillbedisastrous.Fromtimetotime,wecanheart
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