高三英语 improvement of writing from the perspective of comment on routine writing复习学案

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1、湖南省湘潭凤凰中学2015届高三英语Improvementofwritingfromtheperspectiveofcommentonroutinewriting复习学案学习现状：写过很多作文，依然写不出好句子。原因分析：长期以来，作文重前期指导，轻后期点评。写作后的评析较笼统，我们单独与老师进行精细面批的机会较少，领会不了老师的书面批改意图，也没有系统梳理过自身错误。以至于长时间写作水平无法提高。学习目标：通过合作学习，反思探究，结合本次作文评析，梳理出自身作文中的典型错误、可雕琢词句，进一步提升写作技能。学习重点：定语从句、非谓语动词等高级句式在作文中的运用。学习难点：如何将定语从

2、句、非谓语动词等高级句式运用至作文。Lead-inLet’sappreciateacompositionwrittenbyonestudent.Directions:writeanEnglishcompositionaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelow.假如你是李华，你的好朋友张军在来信中向你倾诉了他的烦恼。由于要代表学校参加游泳比赛，他的压力很大。请用英语给他写一封回信，就如何减轻压力，提出至少三条合理的建议并说明理由。SteponewritecorrectsentencesStep(1)改错句，谁最快1.Ihopemysuggestcanhelp

3、you.(陈泉来)2.Aslongasyoutryyourbest,youwillsuccess.(郭倩云)错误类型1：3.Iwantprovidesomesuggestionsforyou.(左文权)1.Iintendtellyou.(肖剑锋)2.Therehavesomeadviceforyou.(李维纳)错误类型2：3.I’mtrytosolveyourproblemmorethanyoucanhelp.(赵桓鑫)4.WhenIfeltpressure,Iusuallylistentosomelightmusic.(朱婵)错误类型3：5.Everyonehavesometroub

4、lesinourlife.(赵桓鑫)6.Schoolchooseyoutotakepartincompetition.(包赞娟)错误类型4：Step(2)考考你我认为你可以取得好成绩。_________________________________________________________SteptwowritepropersentencesStep(1)analyze我认为你可以取得好成绩。Ithinkyoucangetgoodgrades._____________________________________Step(2)Conclude：Step(3)practice

5、1.Itisnecessaryforyoutokeepgreatsleeping.(王翠婉)2.Youcanalsotalkwithyourteacher……andhewilltellyoumanythings,too.(冯婉露)3.Itdoesn’tmatter.Don’tthinktoomuch.(冯婉露)4.Iwanttotellyousomeadvice.(詹丽雯)Step(3)考考你我想给你提些建议。这能帮你放松自己。________________________________________________StepthreewriteartisticsentencesS

6、tep(1)佳句欣赏.1.Next,youcanturntosomeonewhohasrichexperienceinswimming.(李玉)2.Firstyoushouldtakeabreak,whichdoesgoodtoyourbody,aswellasyourmind.(周亦豪)3.Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedyoumusttakepartintheswimmingcompetitionunderhighpressure.(刘洁)4.Itisknownthatbigpressurecandestroyap

7、erson.(李艳芳)5.Learninghowtorelaxyourselfisoneoftheimportantways.(王凤婷)6.Iwillalwaysencourageyou,tellingyounottogiveup.(周友林)Step(3)practice11.Youshouldbeconfident.Thisisthemostimportanttip.(马锦涛)2.Youcanalsotalkwithyourleadteach