3.paragraph-unity，coherence，&process

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1、ParagraphwritingI.Demandsforagoodparagraph1.unity统一性2.completenessoradequateness完整性3.coherence连贯性II.MeanstodevelopaparagraphI.Demandsforagoodparagraph1.UnityTopic/Theme/Controllingidea(主题句,即主题思想)a.Stickorholdtothetopic;b.NoirrelevantsentencesExampleJoeandI

2、decidedtotakethelongtripwe‘dalwayswantedacrossthecountry.Wewerelikeyoungkidsbuyingourcamperandstockingitwithallthenecessitiesoflife.Bellabakesthebestrhubarb(大黄)pie.WestartedoutinearlyspringfromMinneapolisandheadedwestacrossthenorthernpartofthecountry.Webot

3、henjoyedthosepeoplewemetatthetrailerpark.Joereceivedawatchathisretirementdinner.Tooursurprise,wefoundthatwelikedthewarmsouthernregionsverymuch,andsowedecidedtostayhereinNewMexico.Analysiscontrollingidea:takethelongtripacrossthecountry.Objectsofthepara.:Joe

4、andITwoirrelevantsentences:a.“Bellabakesthebestrhubarbpie”b.“Joereceivedawatchathisretirementdinner.”PracticeMynameisRoseanna,andIliketokeepphysicallyfit.Iusedtoweightwohundredpounds,butIjoinedtheYMCAforanexerciseclassanddietprogram.InoneyearIlosteightypou

5、nds.Ifeelmuchbetterandneverwanttohavethatmuchweightonmyfive-feetframeagain.Iboughttwonewsuitcaseslastweek.EverydayIpracticejoggingthreemiles,swimmingfifteenlaps,liftingtwenty-poundweightsandplayingtennisforonehour.Mymotherwasaprematurebaby.AnalysisControll

6、ingidea:“Iliketodeepphysicallyfit.”Irrelevantsentences:a.“Iboughttwonewsuitcaseslastweek”b.“Mymotherwasaprematurebaby”2.completenessoradequatenessa.topicsentenceb.developing/supportingsentences(扩展句)c.concludingsentence一个段落必须有若干扩展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，

7、这就是完整性.b.developing/supportingsentences主要扩展句(majorsupportingstatement)的主要特点是：围绕段落主题句展开的每一个扩展句本身都不要求作进一步的说明或证明，句与句之间的关系是相互独立又是互相连接的。次要扩展句(minorsupportingstatement)是指对主要扩展句作进一步的事实分析和举例说明。它从属于某一个或某几个推展句。Eg：(主题句)Idon'tteachbecauseteachingiseasyforme.(主要推展句1)Te

8、achingisthemostdifficultofthevariouswaysIhaveattemptedtoearnmyliving:mechanic,carpenter,writer.(主要推展句2)Forme,teachingisared-eye,sweaty-palm,sinking-stomachprofession.(次要推展句1)Red-eye,becauseIneverfeelreadytote