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1、TEXT1Abouthalfoftheinfantandmaternaldeathsindevelopingcountriescouldbeavoidedifwomenhadusedfamilyplanningmethodstopreventhighrisk1pregnancies,accordingtoareportpublishingrecentlybytheJohnsHopking2University.Thereportindicatesthat5.6millioninfantdeathsand2,000,000ma
2、ternalDeathscouldbepreventedthisyear讦womenchosetohavetheirschildren3withinthesafestyearswithadequateintervalsamongbirthsandlimitedtheir4familiestomoderatesize.Thisamountstoabouthalfofthe9.8millioninfantand370.000maternaldeathsindevelopingcountries,excludedChina,est
3、imatedforthisyearby5theUnitedNation?sChildren'sFundandtheUSCentersforDiseaseControlrespectably・Chinawasexcludedbecauseveryfewbirthsoccurinthehigh6riskcategories.Thereportsaysthatevidencesfromaroundtheworldshowstheriskof7maternalorinfantillanddeathisthehighestinfour
4、specifictypesof8pregnancy;pregnanciesbeforethemotheris18yearold;thoseafterthe9motheris35yearsold;pregnanciesafterfourbirths;andthoselesserthan10twoyearsapart・Key:1将hadused改为used。因为此句是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，故条件从句中应使用一般过去吋。例女U：Manywouldbewiseiftheydidnotthinkthemselveswise.许
5、多人原本会成为聪明人一如果他们不自以为聪明的话。2将publishing改为publishedreport和publish时逻辑动宾关系，故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰reporto例如：Anydiscoverythatwemaymake,howeversmall,willremainacquiredknowledge.任何可能的发现，不管多么微不足道，都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。3将theirs改为their4将among改为between在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用betweeno5将过去分词exc
6、luded改为介词excludingoexcluding意为"不包括…”6将respectably改为respectively,respectively意为"分别地”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意为"可敬的，值得尊敬地”。7将evidences改为evidence8将ill改为illnesso9将year改为yearso10将lesser改为lessTEXT2“Home,sweethomenisaphrasethatexpressanessentialattitudeintheUnitedStates.Whet
7、hertherealityoflifeinthefamilyhouseissweetornosweet,thecherishedidealofhome1hasgreatimportanceformanypeople.ThisidealisavitalpartoftheAmericandream.Thisdream,dramatizedinthehistoryofnineteenthcenturyEuropeansettlersofAmericanWest,wastofindapieceofplace,buildahouse2
8、forone，sfamily,andstartedafarm.Thesesmallhouseholdswere3portraitsofindependence:theentirefamily-mother,father,children,evengrandparents-liveinasm
