写作错误分析11.19

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1、写作范文及错误分析词汇层面拼写错误词性用法不当词组翻译错误句子表达不当拼写错误faliindoingsthfailindoingsthproblelyprobablyvariesvariousnegivenegativebeawereofbeawareofbeleve/beliefthatbelievethataspitesaspects(方面)BebeneficalforBebeneficialtochartchatenhenceenhance词性用法不当ignoreofstudyignoranceofstudybuildconfidentbuild

2、confidencehaveafunnydayhaveafine/nicedayalotofhappyalotofhappinessWechoice…Wechoose…friendswhoarehelp…friendswhoarehelpfulsurfertheinternetsurftheinternetWiththeworldmodernize,Withthemodernizationoftheworld,词组翻译错误消极影响negativeeffects沉溺于……beaddictedtosth.网上聊天onlinechat/chatting参加体

3、育运动dosports参加派对attendaparty/parties大学生collegestudents保持平衡keepabalancebetweenAandB学习成绩下降failinourstudy句子表达不当Recreationalactivitiescanraisethequalitiesofourliving.Bydoingrecreationalactivities,thequalityofourlivingcanbeimproved.Overreceationalactivitiesalsobringnegativeeffectson…S

4、pendingtoomuchtimeonreceational…Weshouldestablishcorrectgoalinlife.…setapropergoalforourlife.劳逸结合workwithadequaterest…/keepaproperbalancebetweenworkandleisure/Workwhileyouwork,playwhileyouplay.RecreationalActivitiesItisastrikingfactthattheissueofrecreationalactivitieshastriggere

5、daheateddiscussion.Intheeraofinformationandtechnology,increasingnumbersofpeoplearefondoftakingpartinvariousrecreationalactivities(rangingfromwatchingTV,playingcardstosurfingtheInternetandsoon).Yet,noonecouldfailtonoticeboththefavorableandunfavorableinfluencethatrecreationalactiv

6、itiesbringtopeople.Ontheonehand,recreationalactivitiesaregoodtopeople'shealth,bothphysicallyandmentally.Forinstance,sportsanddancingcankeeppeoplefit,andsurfingtheInternetcanbringpeoplealotofinformationandknowledge.Ontheotherhand,recreationalactivitiesmightbeharmfulifpeopleareadd

7、icted.Spendingtoomuchtimeonrecreationalactivitieswillseriouslyaffectpeople'snormallives,especiallyworkandstudy.Frommyperspective,weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheadvantagesofvariousrecreationalactivities.Meanwhile,wemightaswelllearnhowtoavoidsomenegativeeffectsofrecreationalactiviti

8、eswhenmakingthemostofthem.