IELTS Writing Assessments

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1、GeneralTrainingIELTS-Task1samplequestionYouarepreparinganoutdoorsevent.Writealettertoyourfriendtoaskforhelpwiththearrangements.Inyourletteryoushouldinclude:·whattheeventis·whytheeventwillhappen·howyourfriendcanhelpyouiPassstudent'ssampleanswerDearMartin,Iamwritingtoinformyouabout

2、aswimmingcompetitionthatIhaveplannedandrequestyourinputsandhelpforthesame.Ihopeyourecallthatwehadcontributedfundsforaspecializedswimmingfacilitytobebuiltatthelocalcommunityschool.Thestudentsoftheschoolhadwrittentomeseveraltimesinthepastfewmonthsformyhelpinorganizingaswimmingcompe

3、tition.Sincetheyhadbeenlearningswimmingforthepastoneyear,theywantedacompetitiontoshowcasetheirskillsandtalent.Ihavemadeabriefsummaryoffortherulesandregulationsofthecompetition.SinceyouhadbeenaprofessionalswimmerforsometimeincollegeI'drequireyouradviseandinsightsonthesportsgearnee

4、dedforsuchaneventaswellasthecoststhatwouldbeincurred.Further,youcanalsohelpinconvincingsomepeoplefromthelocalswimminggoverningcounciltocomeasguests.Ihaveemailedyoutheplanforameetingnextweekend.Ilookforwardtomeetingyouandfinalizingtheplans.Yoursfaithfully,JosephHelleriPassIELTSora

5、lfeedbackiPasswrittenfeedbackMinimumwordcount: 150words      Yourwordcount: 187wordsMarkingKey 0-3=weak4-5=satisfactory6-7=good8-9=verystrongWritingCriteriaDescriptorWSGVSAreastoImproveFurtherpracticeTaskAchievementhowappropriately,accuratelyandrelevantlytheresponsefulfilstherequ

6、irementsofthetask  ✔ Veryclearletterwithsufficientdetailwhicheasilyfulfilstherequirementsofthetask.CoherenceandCohesionhowwelltheinformationandideasareorganised   ✔Wellorganizedwithclearuseofparagraphing.Justremembertoavoidformallinkingwordsinlettertoafriend:informalvformallinkin

7、gwordshowwelltheinformationislinked  ✔ LexicalResourcetherangeofvocabularyusedandhowaccuratelyitisused  ✔ Remembertokeepyourstyleofwritinginformalifyou’rewritingtoafriend.howappropriatethevocabularyisforthetask  ✔ GrammaticalRangeandAccuracytherangeofstructuresusedandhowaccuratel

8、yitisused  ✔ Remembertousepresentperfect