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1、GeneralTrainingIELTS-Task1samplequestionYouarepreparinganoutdoorsevent.Writealettertoyourfriendtoaskforhelpwiththearrangements.Inyourletteryoushouldinclude:·whattheeventis·whytheeventwillhappen·howyourfriendcanhelpyouiPassstudent'ssampleanswerDearMartin,Iamwritingtoinformyouabout
2、aswimmingcompetitionthatIhaveplannedandrequestyourinputsandhelpforthesame.Ihopeyourecallthatwehadcontributedfundsforaspecializedswimmingfacilitytobebuiltatthelocalcommunityschool.Thestudentsoftheschoolhadwrittentomeseveraltimesinthepastfewmonthsformyhelpinorganizingaswimmingcompe
3、tition.Sincetheyhadbeenlearningswimmingforthepastoneyear,theywantedacompetitiontoshowcasetheirskillsandtalent.Ihavemadeabriefsummaryoffortherulesandregulationsofthecompetition.SinceyouhadbeenaprofessionalswimmerforsometimeincollegeI'drequireyouradviseandinsightsonthesportsgearnee
4、dedforsuchaneventaswellasthecoststhatwouldbeincurred.Further,youcanalsohelpinconvincingsomepeoplefromthelocalswimminggoverningcounciltocomeasguests.Ihaveemailedyoutheplanforameetingnextweekend.Ilookforwardtomeetingyouandfinalizingtheplans.Yoursfaithfully,JosephHelleriPassIELTSora
5、lfeedbackiPasswrittenfeedbackMinimumwordcount: 150words Yourwordcount: 187wordsMarkingKey 0-3=weak4-5=satisfactory6-7=good8-9=verystrongWritingCriteriaDescriptorWSGVSAreastoImproveFurtherpracticeTaskAchievementhowappropriately,accuratelyandrelevantlytheresponsefulfilstherequ
6、irementsofthetask ✔ Veryclearletterwithsufficientdetailwhicheasilyfulfilstherequirementsofthetask.CoherenceandCohesionhowwelltheinformationandideasareorganised ✔Wellorganizedwithclearuseofparagraphing.Justremembertoavoidformallinkingwordsinlettertoafriend:informalvformallinkin
7、gwordshowwelltheinformationislinked ✔ LexicalResourcetherangeofvocabularyusedandhowaccuratelyitisused ✔ Remembertokeepyourstyleofwritinginformalifyou’rewritingtoafriend.howappropriatethevocabularyisforthetask ✔ GrammaticalRangeandAccuracytherangeofstructuresusedandhowaccuratel
8、yitisused ✔ Remembertousepresentperfect
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