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1、讨论严肃话题TalkingaboutsomethingseriousPartsix:范例引路:MODELWRITING某学校附近准备兴建一座化工厂,现征求师生的意见,师生赞成、反对比例如图。请你以该校学生名义,以“Thereareotherthingstoconsiderbesidesmoney”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,陈述反对在此建厂的理由。反对的理由:1、严重污染饮用水,防范措施不充分。2、造成严重的空气污染。3、侵占学生游戏玩乐的场所。同意的理由:1、可以为本市赚钱。2、提供就业机会Itisreported
2、thatanewchemicalworkswillbebuilthere.Certainly,itisagoodideafordevelopingeconomy.Butontheotherhand,italsocausesabigproblem.Firstly,manypeopledon’tagreetobuildthisworks.Itwillpollutethedrinkingwaterthoughtheyhavepromisedtodosomethingtopreventpollution.Secondly,the
3、smokeandthesootwillbringlotsofillness,whichisdangerousforeveryone.Thirdly,thechemicalworkswillbebuiltwherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Ifbuilt,wewillhavenoplaceforfun.Becauseoftheabovereasons,wehopethatthechemicalworkswon’tbebuiltnearourschool.Itis
4、reportedthatanewchemicalworkswillbebuilthere.Certainly,itisagoodideafordevelopingeconomy.Butontheotherhand,italsocausesabigproblem.Firstly,manypeopledon’tagreetobuildthisworks.Itwillpollutethedrinkingwaterthoughtheyhavepromisedtodosomethingtopreventpollution.Seco
5、ndly,thesmokeandthesootwillbringlotsofillness,whichisdangerousforeveryone.Thirdly,thechemicalworkswillbebuiltwherewestudentsplaygamesandhavesportsafterschool.Ifbuilt,wewillhavenoplaceforfun.Becauseoftheabovereasons,wehopethatthechemicalworkswon’tbebuiltnearoursch
6、ool.五个基本环节Fivebasicstepstodiscusssomethingserious一、开头Starting二、提出观点Givingideas三、强化论点Developing四、提出反驳Arguing五、得出结论Comingtoaconclusion规律总结一、开头(Starting)1、陈述事实式Onceagainuniversitygraduatesstartanewroundofjobhunting.Nowinthecountryareas,therearemanychildrenoutofschoo
7、l.2、设问式Rightisright.Right?Butisleftwrong?(IsLeftWrong?)二、提出观点(Givingideas)1、借助常识:Itisknowntoallthatsmokingisharmfultoourhealth.2、直抒己见:Ithinkitisusefultobuildanewdamacrosstheriver.Webelievethatdoingexerciseseverydaywilldousalotofgood.3、巧用成语:“Wherethereisawill,ther
8、eisaway.”ItisthesameinlearningEnglish.三、强化论点(Developing)1、First…,Second…,Third…Finally…2、Firstly…,Secondly…,Thirdly…Finally…3、Firstofall…,Then…,Next…,Atlast…4、