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1、Myopiniononcopyingothers’homework——周周练作文审题1.体裁:观点性作文2.时态:一般现在时3.人称:第一人称they为主4.段落:合计三段为宜:引出话题(已有);主要原因;看法5.注意要点齐全;标题与开头已有,建议不写,节约时间。本篇作文的共性问题:Correction:Copyothers’homeworkisnothonest.Itisdishonestofustocopyothers’homework.Theydon’tdothehomeworkbythemsel
2、vesandtheywanttocopyothers’homeworktomaketheirteachersandparentshappyandsatisfied.Theyprefertocopyothers’homeworkratherthandothehomeworkbythemselvesinordertosatisfytheirparentsandteachers.Itagainsttherulesoftheschool,whichisagainsttherulesoftheschoolaswe
3、ll.Whenyouareintrouble,youshouldturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.Whenintrouble,youaresupposedtoturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.Whenwemeetdifficulties,weshouldturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.Whenmeetingdifficulties,weoughttoturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.
4、Ifyoufollowthesuggestionsabove,youwillcertainlymakegreatprogressinyourstudy.Followingthesuggestionsdiscussedabove,youwillcertainlymakemuchdifferencetoyourstudy.Wehavealotofhomeworktodosothatwe.....Withsomuchhomeworktodo,we.....Besides,Additionally,apartf
5、romthese,inaddition,Takeresponsibilityfor=beresponsibleforManystudentsareverylazy,andtheyarenotinterestedinthesubjectsatall.Manystudentsaresolazythattheyshowlittleinterestinthesubjectsatall.Solazyaremanystudentsthattheyshowlittleinterestinthesubjectsatal
6、l.很容易忽视的一个问题:“It”句式滥用整篇文章不得超过2个it句式,考虑能否用非限制性定语从句能否变换句式,比如动名词短语作主语。。。。。。Modelessay1.作业量大,偏难Theyhavetoomuchhomeworktodo,someofwhichisbeyondthem.Thereistoomuchhomeworkthattheyhavetodo,someofwhichistoodifficultforthem.Theyhavetoomuchhomeworktodo,andsomeofit
7、isbeyondtheirability.2.懒惰,对功课不感兴趣Somestudentsaresolazythattheyarenotinterestedintheirlessonsatall.Someofthestudentsarelazyandnotinterestedinschoolwork.havenointerestintheirlessons3.完成任务,取悦老师和家长Theydon’tworkhardandhavetocopyothers’homeworkjusttofinishthea
8、ssignmentsandpleasetheirteachersandparents.Theycopyothers’homeworktofinishthetasksandpleasetheirteachersandparents.4.抄袭作业不诚实,违反校纪,对自己不负责任It’sdishonestofthemtocopyothers’homework,whichisagainsttheschoolrules.What’smore,copy