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1、Myopiniononcopyingothers’homework——周周练作文审题1.体裁：观点性作文2.时态：一般现在时3.人称：第一人称they为主4.段落：合计三段为宜：引出话题（已有）；主要原因；看法5.注意要点齐全；标题与开头已有，建议不写，节约时间。本篇作文的共性问题：Correction:Copyothers’homeworkisnothonest.Itisdishonestofustocopyothers’homework.Theydon’tdothehomeworkbythemselvesandt
2、heywanttocopyothers’homeworktomaketheirteachersandparentshappyandsatisfied.Theyprefertocopyothers’homeworkratherthandothehomeworkbythemselvesinordertosatisfytheirparentsandteachers.Itagainsttherulesoftheschool,whichisagainsttherulesoftheschoolaswell.Whenyouarei
3、ntrouble,youshouldturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.Whenintrouble,youaresupposedtoturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.Whenwemeetdifficulties,weshouldturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.Whenmeetingdifficulties,weoughttoturntoteachersandparentsforhelp.Ifyoufollowthesuggest
4、ionsabove,youwillcertainlymakegreatprogressinyourstudy.Followingthesuggestionsdiscussedabove,youwillcertainlymakemuchdifferencetoyourstudy.Wehavealotofhomeworktodosothatwe.....Withsomuchhomeworktodo,we.....Besides,Additionally,apartfromthese,inaddition,Takeresp
5、onsibilityfor=beresponsibleforManystudentsareverylazy,andtheyarenotinterestedinthesubjectsatall.Manystudentsaresolazythattheyshowlittleinterestinthesubjectsatall.Solazyaremanystudentsthattheyshowlittleinterestinthesubjectsatall.很容易忽视的一个问题：“It”句式滥用整篇文章不得超过2个it句式
6、，考虑能否用非限制性定语从句能否变换句式，比如动名词短语作主语。。。。。。Modelessay1.作业量大，偏难Theyhavetoomuchhomeworktodo,someofwhichisbeyondthem.Thereistoomuchhomeworkthattheyhavetodo,someofwhichistoodifficultforthem.Theyhavetoomuchhomeworktodo,andsomeofitisbeyondtheirability.2.懒惰，对功课不感兴趣Somestude
7、ntsaresolazythattheyarenotinterestedintheirlessonsatall.Someofthestudentsarelazyandnotinterestedinschoolwork.havenointerestintheirlessons3.完成任务，取悦老师和家长Theydon’tworkhardandhavetocopyothers’homeworkjusttofinishtheassignmentsandpleasetheirteachersandparents.Theyco
8、pyothers’homeworktofinishthetasksandpleasetheirteachersandparents.4.抄袭作业不诚实，违反校纪，对自己不负责任It’sdishonestofthemtocopyothers’homework,whichisagainsttheschoolrules.What’smore,copy
