满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument43)-智课教育旗下智课教育

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1、智课网GRE备考资料满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument43)-智课教育旗下智课教育下面，小编要为大家推荐的是，考生可以通过研究GRE写作范文来提高自己的写作水平。【题目】ThefollowingappearedinamemofromthemayorofthetownofWestEgg:"Twoyearsago,ourconsultantspredictedthatWestEgg'slandfill,whichisusedforgarbagedisposal,wouldbecompletelyfilledwithinfiveyears.Duringthep

2、asttwoyears,however,townresidentshavebeenrecyclingtwiceasmuchaluminumandpaperastheydidinpreviousyears.Nextmonththeamountofmaterialrecycledshouldfurtherincrease,sincechargesforgarbagepickupwilldouble.Furthermore,overninetypercentoftherespondentstoarecentsurveysaidthattheywoulddomorerec

3、yclinginthefuture.Becauseofourresidents'strongcommitmenttorecycling,theavailablespaceinourlandfillshouldlastforconsiderablylongerthanpredicted."【满分范文赏析】【第1段】InthismemoWestEgg'smayorindicatesthatavarietyoffactorsleadtoanincreaseinrecyclingandareductionintheamountoftrashdepositedinthela

4、ndfill.Thelandfill,hestates,shouldnotbefullforconsiderablylongerthanpreviouslyprojected.Tosupportthisprojectionthemayorcitesthefollowingevidence:(1)atwofoldincreaseinaluminumandpaperrecyclingbyWestEggresidentsoverthelasttwoyears,(2)animpendingtwofoldincreaseinchargesfortrashpickup,and

5、(3)arecentsurveyinwhich90%ofrespondentsindicatedthattheyintendtodomorerecyclinginthefuture.Forseveralreasons,however,Iamnotconvincedthatthemayor'sprojectionisaccurate.【本段结构】本文采用了标准的Argument开头段结构，即C—A—F的开头结构。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion，之后简要提及原文为支持其结论所引用的一系列Assumption及细节，最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句，指出原文的Fl

6、aw，即这些Assumption无法让原文的结论具有说服力。【本段功能】作为Argument开头段，本段具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文的结论，即WestEgg垃圾池的装满要比之前顾问预期的晚。本段接下来提到了原文中为支持之前的Conclusion所提供的证据，包括WestEgg居民对于某些特定垃圾的回收量上升了，对于居民征收的垃圾处理费用加倍，以及最近的一项调查表明居民们在将来会做更多的垃圾回收。文章提及这些信息，为是在正文段中对这些Assumption即将进行的具体攻击做铺垫。【第2段】Tobeginwith,aluminumandpapermayaccoun

7、tforonlysomeofthematerialsWestEgg'sresidentscanrecycle.Perhapsrecyclingofotherrecyclablematerials(plasticandglass)hasdeclinedtothepointthatthetotalamountofrecycledmaterialshasalsodeclined.Ifso,thenthemayorcouldhardlyjustifytheclaimthatWestEgg'sresidentsarebecomingmorecommittedtorecycl

8、ing.【