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1、智课网GRE备考资料满分GRE写作范文赏析分享-智课教育旗下智课教育GRE写作高分的秘诀之一就是多看一些高分范文，因此，小编才为同学们汇总整理了一套满分GRE写作范文赏析，供同学们参考学习，同学们一定要好好利用，认真积累哦。满分GRE写作范文赏析分享的正文如下，小编为大家认真分解和讲解了范文的结构和内容，深入挖掘考点，希望能对大家的GRE写作有帮助。【题目】ThefollowingappearedinamemofromthemayorofthetownofWestEgg:"Twoyearsago,ourconsultantspredictedthatWestE

2、gg'slandfill,whichisusedforgarbagedisposal,wouldbecompletelyfilledwithinfiveyears.Duringthepasttwoyears,however,townresidentshavebeenrecyclingtwiceasmuchaluminumandpaperastheydidinpreviousyears.Nextmonththeamountofmaterialrecycledshouldfurtherincrease,sincechargesforgarbagepickupwil

3、ldouble.Furthermore,overninetypercentoftherespondentstoarecentsurveysaidthattheywoulddomorerecyclinginthefuture.Becauseofourresidents'strongcommitmenttorecycling,theavailablespaceinourlandfillshouldlastforconsiderablylongerthanpredicted."【满分范文赏析】【第1段】InthismemoWestEgg'smayorindicate

4、sthatavarietyoffactorsleadtoanincreaseinrecyclingandareductionintheamountoftrashdepositedinthelandfill.Thelandfill,hestates,shouldnotbefullforconsiderablylongerthanpreviouslyprojected.Tosupportthisprojectionthemayorcitesthefollowingevidence:(1)atwofoldincreaseinaluminumandpaperrecyc

5、lingbyWestEggresidentsoverthelasttwoyears,(2)animpendingtwofoldincreaseinchargesfortrashpickup,and(3)arecentsurveyinwhich90%ofrespondentsindicatedthattheyintendtodomorerecyclinginthefuture.Forseveralreasons,however,Iamnotconvincedthatthemayor'sprojectionisaccurate.【本段结构】本文采用了标准的Argu

6、ment开头段结构，即C—A—F的开头结构。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion，之后简要提及原文为支持其结论所引用的一系列Assumption及细节，最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句，指出原文的Flaw，即这些Assumption无法让原文的结论具有说服力。【本段功能】作为Argument开头段，本段具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文的结论，即WestEgg垃圾池的装满要比之前顾问预期的晚。本段接下来提到了原文中为支持之前的Conclusion所提供的证据，包括WestEgg居民对于某些特定垃圾的回收量上升了，对于居民征收的垃圾处理费用加倍，以及最近的一项调查

7、表明居民们在将来会做更多的垃圾回收。文章提及这些信息，为是在正文段中对这些Assumption即将进行的具体攻击做铺垫。【第2段】Tobeginwith,aluminumandpapermayaccountforonlysomeofthematerialsWestEgg'sresidentscanrecycle.Perhapsrecyclingofotherrecyclablematerials(plasticandglass)hasdeclinedtothepointthatthetotalamountofrecycledmaterialshasalsode

8、clined.Ifso,thenthe