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《满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument43)-智课教育旗下智课教育》由会员上传分享,免费在线阅读,更多相关内容在行业资料-天天文库。
1、智课网GRE备考资料满分GRE写作范文赏析分享(argument43)-智课教育旗下智课教育下面,小编要为大家推荐的是,考生可以通过研究GRE写作范文来提高自己的写作水平。【题目】ThefollowingappearedinamemofromthemayorofthetownofWestEgg:"Twoyearsago,ourconsultantspredictedthatWestEgg'slandfill,whichisusedforgarbagedisposal,wouldbecompletelyfilledwithinfiveyears.Duringthep
2、asttwoyears,however,townresidentshavebeenrecyclingtwiceasmuchaluminumandpaperastheydidinpreviousyears.Nextmonththeamountofmaterialrecycledshouldfurtherincrease,sincechargesforgarbagepickupwilldouble.Furthermore,overninetypercentoftherespondentstoarecentsurveysaidthattheywoulddomorerec
3、yclinginthefuture.Becauseofourresidents'strongcommitmenttorecycling,theavailablespaceinourlandfillshouldlastforconsiderablylongerthanpredicted."【满分范文赏析】【第1段】InthismemoWestEgg'smayorindicatesthatavarietyoffactorsleadtoanincreaseinrecyclingandareductionintheamountoftrashdepositedinthela
4、ndfill.Thelandfill,hestates,shouldnotbefullforconsiderablylongerthanpreviouslyprojected.Tosupportthisprojectionthemayorcitesthefollowingevidence:(1)atwofoldincreaseinaluminumandpaperrecyclingbyWestEggresidentsoverthelasttwoyears,(2)animpendingtwofoldincreaseinchargesfortrashpickup,and
5、(3)arecentsurveyinwhich90%ofrespondentsindicatedthattheyintendtodomorerecyclinginthefuture.Forseveralreasons,however,Iamnotconvincedthatthemayor'sprojectionisaccurate.【本段结构】本文采用了标准的Argument开头段结构,即C—A—F的开头结构。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion,之后简要提及原文为支持其结论所引用的一系列Assumption及细节,最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句,指出原文的Fl
6、aw,即这些Assumption无法让原文的结论具有说服力。【本段功能】作为Argument开头段,本段具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文的结论,即WestEgg垃圾池的装满要比之前顾问预期的晚。本段接下来提到了原文中为支持之前的Conclusion所提供的证据,包括WestEgg居民对于某些特定垃圾的回收量上升了,对于居民征收的垃圾处理费用加倍,以及最近的一项调查表明居民们在将来会做更多的垃圾回收。文章提及这些信息,为是在正文段中对这些Assumption即将进行的具体攻击做铺垫。【第2段】Tobeginwith,aluminumandpapermayaccoun
7、tforonlysomeofthematerialsWestEgg'sresidentscanrecycle.Perhapsrecyclingofotherrecyclablematerials(plasticandglass)hasdeclinedtothepointthatthetotalamountofrecycledmaterialshasalsodeclined.Ifso,thenthemayorcouldhardlyjustifytheclaimthatWestEgg'sresidentsarebecomingmorecommittedtorecycl
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