news writing--sentence integration

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1、---SentenceintegrationLeahLaiHuigangMiddleSchoolMay.2014NewsWritingWarmingup!Let’ssharesomelatestnewsaroundtheworldwithyourclassmates!Readapieceofnewsandpayattentiontotheunderlinedstructures.LeadinginTheflightMH370departedMalaysia①andwasexpectedtolandinBeijingthesameday.②H

2、owever,theplanewentmissingovertheSouthChinaSea,③presumedcrashed,④soshipsfromcountries⑤whichareclosesttoitsflightpathscoured(搜索)alargeareaforanywreckage.Whyarethesestructuresusedhere?TheflightMH370departedMalaysia①andwasexpectedtolandinBeijingthesameday.②However,theplanewen

3、tmissingovertheSouthChinaSea,③presumedcrashed,④soshipsfromcountries⑤whichareclosesttoitsflightpathscoured(搜索)alargeareaforanywreckage.①连词–连接并列成分②连词--过渡③非谓语动词短语–作状语⑤连词–引导状语从句⑥定语从句--修饰Levelsofsentenceintegration:学渣：伪学霸：学霸：学神：simpleconjunctions(连词):and,or,but,…clauses:adverbi

4、alclause(状语从句),attributiveclause(定语从句)non-predicateverbphrases(非谓语动词短语)alloftheabove.①AsubwaytrainintheSouthKoreancrashedintoanotheratastationonFriday.②Theaccidentinjuredabout200passengers.Task2：PracticeNews1学渣版：AsubwaytrainintheSouthKoreancrashedintoanotheratastationonFri

5、dayandtheaccidentinjuredabout200passengers.伪学霸版：AsubwaytrainintheSouthKoreancrashedintoanotheratastationonFriday,whichinjuredabout200passengers.学霸&学神版：AsubwaytrainintheSouthKoreancrashedintoanotheratastationonFriday,injuringabout200passengers.①Aferry(渡船)sankoffSouthKorea’s

6、coastonApril16th,2014.②Theferrycarried476people.③Theaccidentleftatleast205peopledeadand97othersmissing.Task2：PracticeNews2学神版：Aferrywhichcarried476peoplesankoffSouthKorea’scoastonApril16th,2014,leavingatleast205peopledeadand97othersmissing.时间2013年9月17日在广东爆发，并持续了数日影响很多房屋、工厂

7、被毁；30人死亡，1人失踪救援各地政府发挥重要作用，帮助无家可归的人重建房屋；全国人民提供援助感想自然灾害是不可避免的；团结就是力量，团结就能克服困难。请根据下列表格中所提供的信息，写一篇关于台风“天兔”的新闻报道。Task3：BasicWriting文章的信息点可看成以下几个简单句：2013年9月17日台风天兔在广东爆发。（天兔）持续了数日。很多房屋、工厂被毁。30人死亡，1人失踪。政府发挥重要作用。（政府）帮助无家可归的人重建房屋。各地人民提供援助。自然灾害是不可避免的。团结就是力量。团结就能克服困难。lastv.unavoidable

8、找出句与句之间的关系，进行句子整合，最后形成作文。Payattentionto:1) Articlestructure(文章结构)2)Wordsandsentencestruct