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1、ChapterFiveDevelopingEffectiveParagraphsPartⅢComposingPeerlessStep1DevelopingtheParagraphFullyStep2ChoosingaPatternofDevelopmentStep1DevelopingtheParagraphFullyAparagraphmaybebothunifiedandcoherentbutstillbeskimpy,unconvincing,orotherwiseinadequate.DevelopingtheParagraphFullyDeve
2、lopingtheParagraphFullyActivityStudythefollowingparagraphtoseewhetheritisaneffectiveone.Despitecomplaintsfromviewers,televisioncommercialsaren’tgettinganymorerealistic.Theirmakersstillpresentidealizedpeopleinunrealsituations.Andtheadvertisersalsopersistinshowingaversionofmale-fem
3、alerelationshipsthatcan’texistinmorethantwohouseholds.Whatdotheadvertisersknowaboutus,orabouthowweseeourselves,thatmakesthemcontinuetoplungemillionsofdollarsintothesekindsofcommercials?Comment:Theparagraphbelowisunified:Itadherestothetopicofbadtelevisioncommercials,anditsattitude
4、towardthemisconsistent.Itisalsocoherentinthesensethattherelationsamongsentencesareapparent.It’struethatthisparagraphgivesusthewriter’smainideas,butweknownothingaboutthespecificcommercialsthatpromptedtheideas.Theparagraphlacksdevelopment,completeness.Itdoesnotprovideenoughinformat
5、ionforustoevaluatethewriter’sassertioninsentence1.Soitisnotaneffectiveparagraph.DevelopingtheParagraphFullyDiscussion:Thetopicsentencestatesthemainideaineachparagraph,butmostparagraphsneedmore.Todevelop,orfleshout,thatmainidea,yousupplyfacts,figures,examples,andillustrations—insh
6、ort,concretedetails—thatpertaintoyourtopicsentence.Forinstance,Yousaythatridingmotorcyclesisdangerous;thenyoushowhowyouknowthistobetrue.Citestatistics,ifyouhavethem,toprovehowmanycyclistsaremaimedandkilledeachyear,butdon’tforgetthatspecificexamplescanbefarmoreconvincingthanimpers
7、onalnumbers.Mentionthebrokennoses,thesplitlip，thefracturedfemurs,thespurtingarteries,thedislocatedelbows,thesplinteredteeth,thecrushedpelvises;andyourreadersmaywellbeconvincedoftherisk.DevelopingtheParagraphFullyLearntotakethefollowingstrategiestomakeafullandcompleteparagraph.(To
8、picsentencesareunderlinedinthefollowinge
