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1、对一节高中英语会考作文点评课反思本文运用任务型教学的理念,设计了标题性任务,比较型任务,列举型任务和解决问题型任务,从一篇朋友的来信出发,自然引入studyabroad主题,让学生评价此信的优点,并和期中考作文的几篇学生习作比较,在书写,句型,词汇,逻辑思维和完整性等几个方面指出不足。特别在句型和词汇方面,总结常用表达优缺点的词汇句型,通过不同形式的任务输入,深入浅出地营造一个有实际意义的语言环境激发学生的兴趣,为当堂写作做铺垫。教学设计Stepl.Leading-inSallyandCherryhavebeenclosefr
2、iendssincechildhood・Whenwegrowup,Cherrydecidestostudyabroad・However,studyingabroadisadouble-edgedsword,whichcanbringyoutotheheaven,alsotothehel1.Soshewritesmealetter・Doyouthinkitisagoodpassage?Why?(设计目的:自然引入studyabroad的主题,复印手写稿发给学生,在书写方面与习作作出直观对比。并从此信中概括出好文章有哪些因素组成。
3、附例文)DearSally,IhavelivedintheUKfor3monthsformyfurtherstudy.Inotonlycomeacrossvarioustroublesbutalsolearnalotduringmylife・Studyingabroadhasmanyadvantages.Firstofall,thereisnodenyingthefactthatIcanlearnaforeignlanguageanddifferentcustoms・Besides,itenablesmetogetintoth
4、ehabitofindependence.Whasmore,studdingabroadmakesitpossibletolearnadvancedknowledgeandtechnology.Ibenefitalot;however,Icannotignorethedisadvantages・Foronething,thereasonwhyIalwaysfeellonelyandmissmyfamilyisthatIfinditdifficulttocommunicatewithothers.Foranother,livin
5、gabroadcostsagreatsumofmoney,whichmayaddburdentomyparents.Worstofall,Ilackexperienceandself-controLTherefore,Icanhardlyhaveabalancebetweenstudyandlife・Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Ifyoucanoffermesomeadvice,Iwillappreciateit.YoursCherryStep2.Sevenrulestowriteago
6、odpassage(复丘卩4篇有代表性的习作):Task1:Comparepassage1and2,whichpassagedoyouprefer?Rule1:Haveneathandwritingandclearorganization(设计目的:直观的比较让学生认识到干净整洁的第一印象很重要)Task2:FindoutthemainideaofeachparagraphinCherry?sletterandlinkingwordsPara1generaldescription;Para2advantages:firstof
7、all---besides・・・whasmorePara3disadvantages:foronthing….foranother・worstofall・・・・Therefore•••Para4conclusion/personalviewsRule2:Uselinkingwordsandtopicsentence顺承关系firstofall,besides,what?smore,inthefirstplace・・・inaddition...moreover转折关系however,while,onthecontrary,alt
8、hough,though,eventhough,despite.・・因果关系Therefore,asaresuIt,thus,nowthat,since,because,thanksto(设计目的:连接词,主题句和过渡句能让文章有清晰的逻辑和组织)Task3:CompareS