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1、写作训练请以记者的身份,根据案件登记卡所提供的情况，用英语写一篇新闻报导稿。字数：120左右案件信息时间昨天下午四点五十分,银行关门前地点公园路一家银行天气大雨,道路通畅事件:目击者讲两个带面罩的年轻人用枪威胁银行职员,携两百万美金逃跑.没有人受伤或遇害.警察正在搜查这两名抢劫犯.英语作文“六步法”教学Step1．仔细审题Step2.理清要点Step3.译写单句Step4.连句成篇Step5.检查润色每句话写好后，用适当的连词接起来，使之上下连贯，呼应，通顺，简洁。适当地用一些高级词汇短语和句式检查一下
2、有没有时态，语态，拼写错误并逐一加以改正Step6.定稿誊写卷面整洁干净Step1:仔细审题这是一篇新闻报道,主要是讲公园路发生的一起抢劫.注意有时间,人物,时间,地点,天气。涉及到的词汇有:robber,robbery,rob,littletraffic,eyewitness,threaten,clerk,injure,searchfor.字数:120左右Step2：理清要点1.抢劫发生在昨天下午四点五十,银行关门前。1.银行位于公园路。2.当时在下大雨,道路通畅。3.目击者陈述抢劫犯是2名戴面罩的年
3、轻人,他们用枪威胁职员,抢走了2百万美元。4.抢劫中无人受伤或遇害。5.警察正在搜寻他们。Step3：译写单句•Arobberyhappenedat4:50p.m.yesterdaybeforethebankwasclosed.•ThebankwasintheParkStreet.•Itwasrainingheavilyandtherewaslittletrafficontheroad.•Theeyewitnesssaidthattworobbersweretwoyoungmenwithmasks,an
4、dtheythreatenedtheclerkswithguns.Theyrobbed2milliondollars.•Noonewasinjuredorkilledintherobbery.•Thepolicearesearchingforthem.Step4：连句成篇Arobberyhappenedat4:50p.m.yesterdaybeforethebankwasclosed.ThebankwasintheParkStreet.Anditwasrainingheavilywithlittletr
5、afficontheroad.Theeyewitnesssaidthatsuddenlytwoyoungmenwithmasksrushedintothebankandthreatenedtheclerkswithguns.ThenTheyrobbed2milliondollars.Luckily,noonewasinjuredorkilledintherobbery.Thepolicearesearchingforthem.Step5：检查润色Yesterdayafternoon,arobberyha
6、ppenedinabankintheParkStreet.Accordingtothewitnesses’statements,itwasat4:50pm,justbeforetheclosingtimeofthebankthattherobberyhappened.Anditwasrainingheavily/catsanddogs,withlittletrafficontheroadoutside.Suddenly,twoyoungmenwithmasksrushedinandthreatenedt
7、heclerkswithguns.Thentheyrushedoutanddrovedawaywithabout2,000,000dollars.Allthethingslastedforonlyafewminutes.Fortunately,therewasnobodyinjuredorkilledintherobbery.Nowthepolicearesearchingfortherobbers,hopingwhoevergetstheconnectedinformationcallsthemupa
8、ssoonaspossible.Step6:定稿誊写卷面整洁干净学生习作中的典型语言错误：一、张冠李戴Abandwasrubbed.Attenpastfive,….Aseewitness/eyelooksaidthat….Theytook2billiondollarsandranaway.Thepoliceareresearchingforthetworobbers.二、画蛇添足At4:50p.m.intheafternoonThebank
