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2、'llbeanenergeticwomaninmythirties.I'mgoingtobeverysuccessfulinmycareer.Atthattime,IwillhavebeenapopularEnglishteacherinmybelovedjuniorhighschoolinwhichI'mstudyingnow.SometimesIwillgivemystudentsonlineclassesthroughtheinternetandsometimesweareallprese
3、ntintheclassroominperson.Whenweareatschool,playinggameswithmystudentsandhelpingthemwiththeirdifficultieswillbemyroutinebetweenclasses.Asanenthusiasticteacher,Iliketosharemytimewithmylovelychildren.However,Iamgoingtoinsistonmyhobby---readingbooks,whic
4、hIdevelopedwhenIwasyoung.WhenI'mfreefrommybusiness,goingonlineandchattingwithmyfriendsandteacherswillbeaperfectwayofkillingtime.Withthedevelopmentofthetechnology,Iwillliveaneasyandcomfortablelife.Needlesstosay,Iwon'tneedtocleanthehouseorwashclothes,f
5、ortheintelligentrobotwhichisinventedalreadywilldoalltaskslikethat.Inmydailylife,cellphoneswillplayaveryimportantrole,actingasremotecontrols,computers,andsoon.Withahandsomehusbandwholovesme,Iwillliveahappylifetogetherwithhim.AsIdream,alovelygirlwillco
6、meintoourlife,whoisourangel.Playingwithhercanbesosweetatask,andIwillattempttotakegoodcareofher.Havingahappyfamilyandsomanynewproductions,Iwillenjoymyfuturelife.Myfuturelife姓名右安门外国语学校学号8720675考试序号2班级初二(丰台区初二备课组长)班分数92.5Intwentyyears,Iwillbethirty-four
7、yearsold.IthinkIwillbeasuccessfulandhappyperson.IwillbeagoodEnglishtranslatorandIwillhavemyEnglishclass.IwilllovemyjobbecauseIloveEnglish.IdonotoftengototheofficebecauseIcanworkathome,accordingtothediaryofmyworklist.Iwon'tneedtowakeupearlyandIcanwork
8、untillateatnightIthinkpeoplemusthaveenoughsleep,inordertobetterwork.Iwillleavehomeandliveinmyownflat.However,IwilllivenearmyparentsandIwillvisitthemoften,Iwillneverforgetmyparents.Everyyear,wewillhaveafamilytriptogether.Inmysparetime,I’mgoingtospeakE
