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1、一标题：TeamWork字数:不低于100字并且不高于500字满分:100要求：Directions:Forthispart,you'llhavetowriteanessayentitledTeamWork.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1)为什么我们要学习团队合作；2)你是如何在大学加强自己的团队合作能力的；3)学会团队合作的关键是什么。Asweallknow,teamworkplaysanimportantpartinoursucce
2、ss.However,whatisteamwork?Withoutdoubt,whatiscalledteamworkmeanseachpersonontheteamshouldworkwithinagroupofpeople,whichisnumberofpeoplegreaterthanone.Certainly,evenifthereareonlytwopeopleinthegroup,theycanbecalledateam.Therefore,itisanessentialrequirementofanyemplo
3、ymentthatanypotentialemployeeisateamplayer.Asthesayinggoes:Manyhandsmakelightwork;Ifeveryoneismovingforwardtogether,thensuccesstakescareofitself;Talentwinsgames,butteamworkandintelligencewinchampionships;Agreatpersonattractsgreatpeopleandknowshowtoholdthemtogether;
4、etc.Allthesayingsabovewehaveheardornotaboutteamallemphasizethesignificanceofcooperationtoanextent.Therefore,itisnecessaryforustolearntohowtocooperatewithothers,whichwillturnouttobeeasierforustosucceedinouraims.Ascurrentcollegestudents,playinganimportantroleonthetea
5、mnomatterwhatwherethatisfrom.Tomypointofview,eventhepupilsknowtheeffectofcooperation,whichisthereasonwhywecollegestudentsshouldtakeactionrightaway!What'smore,itiswellknownthatanygreatprojectcanmakeitwithoutteams.Soduringmytimeinuniversity,Iwilltakeanactivepartinthe
6、teamstoworkhardinordertoachievemoresuccesses.Forinstance,givesomesuggestionsortrymybesttosupporttheteamwork.Insteadofmerelystudyhardregardlessofthethingsaroundus,somethingthatIthinkisthemostimportantiseverymemberoftheteamhasaveryspecificrole--asacaptain,goalkeeper,
7、striker,midfielderordefender.Apartfromthat,eachmembershouldcareforeachother.Whenoneofthememberismissing,theteamishandicappedandsoon.Onlyinthisway,cantheteamachieveagreatsuccess.1.1Asweallknow,teamworkplaysanimportantpartinoursuccess.[修改][搭配统计]动名搭配play...part在教材中出现过
8、4525次[学习提示]易混词汇:part,piece,section,division,portion,fraction,fragment,segment,share均可表示“整体的一部分”之意。important的近义表达有crucial/essential。[批改提示]know近义表达
