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1、Intheend,Imustpointoutthatsincepaintersalwaysinnovateandcommunicatewitheachother,especiallyinthisglobalizedworld,thisdifferencemightnotapplytoallpaintings.ButitisstillamajordifferencebetweentraditionalChineseandWesternpaintingsandIhopemypresentationcanhelpyouunderstanditbet
2、ter.Thankyou!CommentsContentThespeakerleadsinwithaninterestingsaying,whichisagoodmoveindrawingthereader’sattention,andalsoagoodsimiletoexpressthemainpointofthepresentation.What’smore,thispresentationisrichinexamples,likestoriesofGuKaizhiandWangWeiinthesecondparagraph,whichh
3、elplistenersunderstandtheabstractperceptionsclearly.Moreover,thespeaker’sanalysisofthereasonisinspiring,too.StructureThestructureofthispresentationislogicalandcoherent,thankstotheclearanddetailedscaffoldingofthetextbook.Cohesivedeviceswithineachparagraphandbetweenparagraphs
4、arealsousedskillfully,whichmakesitveryaudience-friendly.Intheopeningparagraph,byusingavividsaying,thespeakernicelynavigatesreaderstothetopicsentence,“Specificallyspeaking,ChinesepaintersseektoconveytheinherentspiritofsubjectswhileWesternpainterstendtorecreatesubjectsinareal
5、isticmanner”,thenthespeakeridentifiesthedifferentartperceptionsofChineseandWesternpaintingsandthenexplainsthereasonswhytheyaredifferent.Thepresentationconcludeswiththespeaker’sfurtherunderstandingofthistopic,whichmakesthepointmoreconvincingandcomplete.LanguageThespeakerhasa
6、relativelystrongcommandoflanguageskillssotheideasarefullyandclearlyexpressed.Besides,somewordsandexpressionsfromthetextarealsoemployed,suchas“conveytheinherentspirit,”“recreate...inarealisticmanner,”and“resemblelife”andsoonwhichisexactlywhatwehopetosee.Onethingthespeakernee
7、dstopayattentiontoisthattheclaim“Chinaisthecountryofpoetry”isnotconvincingenough.Thespeakermightrefertotherationalistandempiricisttradition.Also,itwouldbebetterifthespeakercouldaddsomevarietyinwordsandsentencestructures.Translation解密《蒙娜丽莎》——E.H.冈布里奇1列奥纳多有一件画作,它的名气可能比《最后的晚宴》
8、更为显赫。2这幅作品便是《蒙娜丽莎》——是一位名叫丽莎的佛罗伦萨女士的肖像画。对于一件艺术品来说,像《蒙娜丽莎》那样举世闻名并非一件单纯的幸事。我们已经太习惯于在图