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1、Teachers,Teachers范文大学英语作文Teachers英语作文网为您收集Ihavebeenastudentfor12years.Duringthistime,Ihavegainedknoetdifferentpeople,andshapedmycharacter.Teachersareanimportantfactor.Theyaretheguides,friends,helpproviders,andeventheenemies.Inshort,theyarelikeactorsplayingdifferentrolesonth
2、eplatform.Someofthemaresoimpressiveanduniquethattheyarestillclearinmymind.Mr.Heisaconscientiousmanedglasses.Hegoestogreatlengthstoprovideusore,thebetter.issostofusaredaydreaming!Themakesitdifficultforustoconcentrateonanythingshesays.Hervoiceislikealullabythatcoulddriveacryi
3、ngbabytosleep.Therestareobsessedee.Theydrooptheirheadsasloeotherstudentsarefascinatedbythesceneryoutsidetheeextent.Once!evensaetimesics.Thatshouldhaveinterestedus,butshejustrepeatsplesinreality.Andseldomdoesshedisplayquotationsandillustrations.MissproveheryChineseteacher.He
4、isinagrayshirtallthroughtheseasonssoIalbest.Heisareservedmanofaverageheight,ileonhisface.Heiscasualanyassignments.Inhisclass,everyonefeelsrelaxed.Hisloinds,likestreams,emberhispouchemphasisasothersubjects.Butsandessaysofgreatvitality.AsIgroanyteachershavehelpedme.Professors
5、andlecturersgiveusmoreinformationaboutsociety,scienceandculture.Theyarefixedinmymind.Ontheotherhand,teachersshouldalsomunicatemoreoreefficientrelationshipcouldbeestablished.简评本文的是个有心人,他仔细地观察着身边的老师。文中,生动地描述了三位风格迥异的老师——他们的穿着、个性、特别是上课的方式——并做了一定的评价。其中,第一位老师的敬业精神和对学生的严格要求令人肃然起敬;
6、第二位老师照本宣读的教学方式使学生对她的课程毫无兴趣;第三位老师则表现了良好的人文气质,引领学生进入文学世界。如果在描写三位老师时注意排列顺序——如时间顺序:小学老师一中学老师一大学老师,文章的结构会更为严密,条理会更加分明。文章读来自然、流畅,在遣词造句上都展示了良好的语言功底。但是仍有一些句子带有汉语味,如第四段中Hisloinds,likestreams,eliteraryworks。
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