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1、例文12009.11.08Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Aperson’slooksordressesismoreimportanttosuccessthangoodideas.Therearealotoffactorsthatleadtoaperson'ssuccess.Amongthem,looksandgoodideasseemtobetwomajorboosters（n.（电器的）增压机（booster的名词复数）； 辅助药剂； 热情的
2、支持者； 加强剂量）.Hence（因此;由此;所以）,thereisalong-lastingcontroversyaboutwhichoneactuallydomoretomakepeoplesuccessful.Inmyopinion,itdependsontheoccupationsofpeople.Firstly,outstandingthoughtsarethebestweapon（n.武器，兵器）forresearchers.Suchbrainworkersareworkingalldayan
3、dallnighttoexplorenewpossibilities.Notbytheirappearance,butbytheirresearchworkdopeoplevaluethem.【Forexample,professorElbertEinstein,oneofthegreatestscientistsinhistory,oftenshowedothershisold-fashionedsweatersandhisundesignedhairstyle.Butpeoplenevertookth
4、isintoconsideration,whattheythinkimportantishisrefreshingdiscoveryoftheTheoryRelativityandhiscontributiontothelawofphotoelectriceffect（光电效应）,bywhichhewontheNobelPrize.】SUM：Therefore,goodideasaremoresignificantthanthewaythelookforresearchers.Secondly,forco
5、mmonpeople,looksandideasseemtohavethesamesignificance.Indailylife,appearancedecidesifpeoplecanleavegoodimpressionstoothersforthefirsttimeandthoughtdecidesiftheycanremainlong-lastingfriendship.Appearanceisafactorforpeopletogethiredandemployees'mindstellthe
6、bossesiftheyshouldkeeptheclerks（n.<美>店员（clerk的名词复数）； <英>办事员； （议会、法院等的）书记员； 簿记员）onboard,orevenpromotethem.【Forinstance,whenmyfriendJackattendedtheinterviewofCoca-Colaforainternshipposition,hewaswearinghissuitwhilemostofotherapplicantswereincasualclothes.Th
7、isseriousappearancesupplementedhimtobeselected.Duringhissummervacationinthedrinkmanufacturer,heshowedhiscompetence,wontheappreciationfromhissuperiorofficersandobtainafreshgraduatepositioninthecompany.】SUM：Fortheseoccasionsitisreallyhardtosay/tellwhichfact
8、or,looksorideas,playsamorecrucialrolebecausewithoutanyofthem,successwillnevercomeintotruth.Finally,forpeopleworkinginfashionandentertainmentindustry,theirlooksaresurelyamoreessentialpartoftheirsuccess.Celebritiesare
