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1、例文12009.11.08Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Aperson’slooksordressesismoreimportanttosuccessthangoodideas.Therearealotoffactorsthatleadtoaperson'ssuccess.Amongthem,looksandgoodideasseemtobetwomajorboosters(n.(电器的)增压机(booster的名词复数); 辅助药剂; 热情的
2、支持者; 加强剂量).Hence(因此;由此;所以),thereisalong-lastingcontroversyaboutwhichoneactuallydomoretomakepeoplesuccessful.Inmyopinion,itdependsontheoccupationsofpeople.Firstly,outstandingthoughtsarethebestweapon(n.武器,兵器)forresearchers.Suchbrainworkersareworkingalldayan
3、dallnighttoexplorenewpossibilities.Notbytheirappearance,butbytheirresearchworkdopeoplevaluethem.【Forexample,professorElbertEinstein,oneofthegreatestscientistsinhistory,oftenshowedothershisold-fashionedsweatersandhisundesignedhairstyle.Butpeoplenevertookth
4、isintoconsideration,whattheythinkimportantishisrefreshingdiscoveryoftheTheoryRelativityandhiscontributiontothelawofphotoelectriceffect(光电效应),bywhichhewontheNobelPrize.】SUM:Therefore,goodideasaremoresignificantthanthewaythelookforresearchers.Secondly,forco
5、mmonpeople,looksandideasseemtohavethesamesignificance.Indailylife,appearancedecidesifpeoplecanleavegoodimpressionstoothersforthefirsttimeandthoughtdecidesiftheycanremainlong-lastingfriendship.Appearanceisafactorforpeopletogethiredandemployees'mindstellthe
6、bossesiftheyshouldkeeptheclerks(n.<美>店员(clerk的名词复数); <英>办事员; (议会、法院等的)书记员; 簿记员)onboard,orevenpromotethem.【Forinstance,whenmyfriendJackattendedtheinterviewofCoca-Colaforainternshipposition,hewaswearinghissuitwhilemostofotherapplicantswereincasualclothes.Th
7、isseriousappearancesupplementedhimtobeselected.Duringhissummervacationinthedrinkmanufacturer,heshowedhiscompetence,wontheappreciationfromhissuperiorofficersandobtainafreshgraduatepositioninthecompany.】SUM:Fortheseoccasionsitisreallyhardtosay/tellwhichfact
8、or,looksorideas,playsamorecrucialrolebecausewithoutanyofthem,successwillnevercomeintotruth.Finally,forpeopleworkinginfashionandentertainmentindustry,theirlooksaresurelyamoreessentialpartoftheirsuccess.Celebritiesare