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1、ArgumentSample1InthisargumenttheauthoremploysavarietyofevidenceaboutPaleans,includingtheirgeographicalisolationandthediscoveryofabasket,toarguethatPaleanbasketscouldhavebeenmadebynon-Paleancultures.Wemayacceptpartoftheauthor’sclaimregardingthePaleans,butintheabsenceofsomecr
2、iticalevidence,wecannotaccepttheconclusionthatthePaleanshavenomeansoftransportingoneoftheirbasketstootherregion.Inthefirstplace,theauthorassumesthatthePaleanscouldnothavereachedLithosbecausenoPaleanboathasbeenfound.However,theauthoristreatingalackofproofthatthePaleanscouldh
3、avepossessedsomekindofboatassufficientproofthattheydidnotpossessanysuchvehiclesatall.FromthepassageweareonlyinformedthatPaleanboats“werenotfound”,butthemerefactthatnoboatfoundcurrentlycouldnotfullyillustratethatthePaleansdidnothaveboats.WeneedconcreteevidencetoshowthatthePa
4、leansdidnotmastertheskillofshipbuilding.GrantedthatthePaleansdidpossessnoboats,westillneedevidencetoprovethatthebasketcouldnothavearrivedinLithosbyothermeans.AlthoughtheBrimRiverisdeepandbroadatpresent,itmightbeshallowerandnarroweratPaleantime,oratleastsomesectionsoftherive
5、rwerelessdeepandbroadatthattime.Ifso,thePaleanscouldhavecrossedtheriverwithoutboat.SomearchaeologicalandgeologicalrecordsordocumentsabouttheconditionoftheBrimRiveratancienttimemightbeusefulforevaluatingtheargument.Assumingthattheriverwasalsodeepandbroadinancienttimeandcanbe
6、crossedonlybyboat,thereisapossibilitythatsomevehicleswereinthepossessionofasecondculturewithwhomthePaleanpeoplekeptincontact.ThesecondculturemighthavebroughtthediscoveredbaskettoLithosduringtradingorotheractivities.Alsopossibly,thebasketmayhavebeenbroughttoLithosbysomeother
7、peoplelatterlyafterthedisappearanceofthePaleans,ormayhavedriftedtothesiteduetogeologicalaccidentssuchasaflood.TheauthorshouldprovideevidencetoshowthatPaleanshadnosignificantcontactwithothercultureswhopossessedboats,andthatthebasketcouldnotbecarriedtothesitethroughothermetho
8、dssuchastradingorsomeaccidents.Westillcannotruleoutthepossibilitythatthebasketswer
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