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6、他的一次天堂之旅。作者心目中的天堂像一个世外桃源:杨柳和桃花装饰着绸带般的河流,山水环绕,湖面上点缀着莲花朵朵。作者沉浸在美景中,忘却了一切烦恼和欲望。然而,作者渐渐地对这种没有挑战、竞争,没有欢乐与痛苦的生活感到了厌烦。作者最终体会到:在这个并不完美的世界中,种种悲欢离合,成功与失败才是真实的生活,真实的美。本文非常富有哲理性,表现了作者对人生的思考,对生活的热爱。在写作技巧方面,几句写景的句子结构平衡,用词优美:Rivers,lieflatingribbns,areebellishedithgreenillsandredpeahblsss.untains,shrudedinist,a
7、resurrundedbtheflingater,pureandblue.此外,文章的句型丰富,长短句结合运用,显示了一定的写作功底。(点评教师:黄莺)BafrParadise英语作文网为您收集作文网