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6、il,butIannt,ItsufferParadiseisparadiseLifeisustlife简评本文中，作者凭借着丰富的想像力，描述了他的一次天堂之旅。作者心目中的天堂像一个世外桃源：杨柳和桃花装饰着绸带般的河流，山水环绕，湖面上点缀着莲花朵朵。作者沉浸在美景中，忘却了一切烦恼和欲望。然而，作者渐渐地对这种没有挑战、竞争，没有欢乐与痛苦的生活感到了厌烦。作者最终体会到：在这个并不完美的世界中，种种悲欢离合，成功与失败才是真实的生活，真实的美。本文非常富有哲理性，表现了作者对人生的思考，对生活的热爱。在写作技巧方面，几句写景的句子结构平衡，
7、用词优美：Rivers，lieflatingribbns，areebellishedithgreenillsandredpeahblsss．untains，shrudedinist，aresurrundedbtheflingater，pureandblue．此外，文章的句型丰富，长短句结合运用，显示了一定的写作功底。文章
