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1、第一集交通事故的困扰SixmonthsagotheregionofForestvilleincreasedthespeedlimitforvehiclestravelingontheregion'shighwaysbytenmilesperhour.4l.u2M,B;X*DSincethatchangetookeffect,thenumberofautomobileaccidentsinthatregionhasincreasedby15percent.9{#F4g;H7J5Butthespeedlimi
2、tinElmsford,aregionneighboringForestville,remainedunchanged,andautomobileaccidentsdeclinedslightlyduringthesamesix-monthperiod.2`-U.j/p;nTherefore,ifthecitizensofForestvillewanttoreducethenumberofautomobileaccidentsontheregion'shighways,theyshouldcampaign
3、toreduceForestville'sspeedlimittowhatitwasbeforetheincrease.大家想想我问什么要把这些词标出来,为什么用不同的颜色?答案随后揭晓~~Theagrumentiswell-presented,butnotthoroughlywell-reasoned.BymakingacomparisonoftheregionofForestville,thetownwiththehigherspeedlimitandthereforeautomobileaccide
4、nts,withtheregionofElmsford,anareaofalowerspeedlimitandsubsequentlyfeweraccidents,theargumentforreducingForestville'sspeedlimitsinordertodecreaseaccidentsseemslogical.11首段:看看范文的首段都交代了什么我们也就能知道我们应该怎么写了~~1,短文的大框架是什么,也就是它的目的是什么,且为了达到这个目的,它通过了什么手段,从红色的文字我们可以看
5、出来。By...;inorderto...2,通过比较的方法,那谁和谁作比较,把比较的双方简单描述注意:重要的是要写出短文推理的逻辑关系,即紫色字体:therefore;subsequently这样就把这篇文章的目的,逻辑推理都总结出来了,所以我们在写首段的时候也要力争写出这些内容。However,thecitizensofForestvillearefailingtoconsiderotherpossiblealternativestotheincreasingcaraccidentsafterther
6、aiseinspeedlimit.Suchalternativesmayincludethefactthatthereare1lessreliablecarstravelingtheroadsinForestville,orthattheagebracketofthoseinElmsfordmaybemoreconducivetodrivingsafely.Itispossiblethattherearemoreyounger,inexperienced,ormoreelderly,unsafedrive
7、rsinForestvillethanthereareinElmsford.Inaddition,thecitizenshavefailedtoconsiderthegeographicalandphysicalterrainofthetwodifferentareas.//PerhapsForestville'shighwayis2inanareaofmoredangerouscurves,sharpturns,orhasmanyintersectionsormergingpointswhereacci
8、dentsaremorelikelytooccur.Itappearsreasonable,therefore,forthecitizenstofocusonthesetroublespotsthantoreducethespeedintheentirearea.Elmsfordmaybeanareaofeasierdrivingconditionswhereaccidentsarelesslikelytooccurregar