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ARuntoRememberThirteencanbeachallengingage.NotonlydidIhavetoadapttomychangingbody.Ialsohadtodealwithmyparents’bitterdivorce,anewfamilyandtheupsettingmovefrommycountryhometoacrowdedsuburb.Whenwemoved,mybelovedcompanion,asmallbrownpony(小马),hadtobesold.Feelinghelplessandalone,Icouldn’teatorsleep,andIcriedallofthetime.Imissedmyfamily,myhomeandmypony.Finally,myfather,realizinghowmuchImissedmypony,purchasedanoldredhorseformeatalocalmarket.Myhorse,Cowboy,waswithoutadoubttheugliesthorseintheworld.Hewaspigeon-toedandknock-kneed.ButIdidn’tcareabouthisfaults.Ilovedhimbeyondallreasons.IjoinedaridingclubandfacedrudecommentsandmeansnickersaboutCowboy’slooks.IneverletonhowIfelt,butdeepdowninside,myheartwasbreaking.Theothermembersrodebeautifulregisteredhorses.WhenCowboyandIenteredtheeventswherethehorseisjudgedonappearance,wewerequicklyoutofthegame.Ifinallyrealizedthatmyonlychancetocompetewouldbeinthetimed-speedevents.Ichosebarrelracing(绕桶赛),aneventinwhichahorseanditsriderattempttocompleteatriangularpatternaroundthreebarrelsinthefastesttime.OnegirlnamedBeckyrodeabigbrownhorseintheraceevents.Shealwayswontheblueribbons.Needlesstosay,shedidn’tfeelthreatenedwhenIcompetedagainstheratthenextshow.Shedidn’tneedto.Icameinnexttolast.ThebittermemoryofBecky’ssmirks(得意的笑)mademedeterminedtobeather.Forthewholenextmonth,IwokeupearlyeverydayandrodeCowboyfivemilestothearena(运动场地).WepracticedforhoursinthehotsunandthenIwouldwalkCowboyhome.OnthewayhomeIwouldbesotired;thosefivemilesseemedtwiceaslong.Allofourhardworkdidn’tmakemefeelconfidentbythetimetheshowcame.IsatatthegateandsweateditoutwhileIwatchedBeckyandherhorsechargethroughthepatternofbarrels,finishingthecoursewithcase.本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者才13岁就承受着家庭的变故，并且失去了宠物小马驹的陪伴，他很孤单，需要陪伴。父亲在当地市场买了一匹老马，尽管Cowboy很丑，她还是很喜欢他在身边；一个叫贝基的女孩骑着一匹棕色的大马参加比赛，当作者在与她竞争时，她轻易的赢了，但是贝基得意的笑让作者决心打败她，并且最终做到了。【续写范文】Myturnfinallycame.AsI urged Cowboyforward,he stumbled,andalmostfell, muchtothedelightof theotherriders.I jammed myhatdownonmyhead, stroked Cowboy's学科网（北京）股份有限公司
1bigredneckandenteredthearena. Atthesignal,we dashed toward thefirstbarrel,quickly whippedaround itandwithperfectprecision rounded thesecondand thunderedon tothethird.We torearound thefinalcurveand shotfor thefinishline.NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.Theendofourrun wasmetwithsurprisedsilence. Withthesoundofmyheartpoundinginmyears,Iheardtheannouncercallourtime.CowboyandIhadbeatenBeckyandherproudfancyhorse!Igainedmuchmorethanablueribbonthatday.Atthirteen,IrealizedthatI'dalwayscomeoutawinnerifIwantedsomethingbadlyenoughtoworkforit.Icanbethemasterofmyowndestiny.【范文译文】终于轮到我了。当我催促牛仔前进时，他跌跌撞撞，差点摔倒，这让其他骑手很高兴。我把帽子戴在头上，抚摸着牛仔红红的大脖子，走进了竞技场。接到信号后，我们冲向第一个枪管，迅速绕过它，以完美的精度绕过第二个枪管，然后轰轰烈烈地冲向第三个枪管。我们绕过最后的弯道，冲向终点线。当我结束表演时，空气中没有欢呼声。我们的奔跑结束时遇到了令人惊讶的沉默。随着我的心跳声在我耳边，我听到播音员在叫我们的时间。我和牛仔打败了贝基和她骄傲的花马！那天我得到的不仅仅是一条蓝丝带。十三岁的时候，我意识到如果我非常想要一些东西来为它工作，我总是会成为赢家。我可以成为自己命运的主人。2.【原文内容】Duringthispastyear,I’vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn’tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤顶),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(锯子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglog(圆木)onthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron(拆轮胎的扳手).Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman’shand,buthewouldn’ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.学科网（北京）股份有限公司
2本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了去年作者汽车出现了三次故障，大多数人都懒得帮忙，作者对此感到很厌烦。有一次，他的汽车又出故障了。他在路边求助了接近3个小时，但是没有人停下来帮忙。就在打算放弃的时候，一个过路的墨西哥家庭停下来，提供了帮助。【续写范文】WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.ItoldherIhadn'thadlunchbecauseI'dbeenwaitinghereforhelpfornearlythreehours.Thegirlsaidtheydidn'thaveluncheither.Shesuggestedtoherparentsthatwehavelunchtogether.Theirtruckhappenedtohavesomefoodandsomethingsforthepicnic.Soweatetogetherinavacantlotbythesideoftheroad.Duringthattime,ItoldaboutwhathadhappenedtomeandhowIfelt.TheysharedinterestingstoriesabouttheirlivesinMexicoandonfruitfarms.Afterlunch,thegirl'smotherputapaperbagoffruitinmyjeep.Ishowedmygratitudeagainandwesaidgoodbyetoeachother.Aftertheyleft,Igotintomyjeepandopenedthepaperbag.Therearesomedelicatefruitsinthepaperbag.IwassurprisedtofindthemoneyIhadquietlyleftthem.Atthesametime,therewasanotewrittenbythegirl,whichread“Weareveryhappytobeabletohelpyou.Wehaveencounteredmanydifficultiesandbeendisappointed.Butwemetalotofhelpfulpeople,whichmadeusfeelverywarm.Tohelpotherswithone'sownabilityisalsoakindofliftingafinger.Thebeautyoflifecomesfromtheseliftingafinger.Ihopeyouhaveagoodlifeandahappymood.”Thismademeverymoved,andIwouldtrymybesttohelpmorepeopleinthefuturetomakeourworldmorebeautifulandwarmer.【范文译文】我正要告别时，那个女孩问我吃过午饭了没有。我告诉她我没有吃午饭，因为我在这里等了将近三个小时的人来帮忙。那个女孩说他们也没吃午饭。她向她的父母建议我们一起吃午饭。他们的卡车碰巧有一些食物和野餐用的东西。于是我们在路边的一块空地上一起吃饭。在那段时间里，我讲述了发生在我身上的事情和我的感受。他们分享了他们在墨西哥和水果农场生活的有趣故事。午饭后，女孩的妈妈在我的吉普车里放了一纸袋水果。我再次表达了我的感激之情，我们彼此道别。他们走后，我上了吉普车，打开纸袋。纸袋里有一些精致的水果。我惊讶地发现我悄悄留给他们的钱。与此同时，女孩写了一张纸条，上面写着:“我们很高兴能够帮助你。我们遇到了许多困难，也感到失望。但是我们遇到了很多乐于助人的人，这让我们感到很温暖。用自己的能力帮助别人，也是一种举手之劳。生活的美丽就来自于这些举手之劳。我希望你有一个好的生活和一个快乐的心情。”这让我很感动，我将尽我最大的努力帮助更多的人在未来使我们的世界更美丽，更温暖。3.【原文内容】Afteralongday,ZhangTianfinallygotbacktohissmallroom,feelingtired.Hehadstartedworkingatseveninthemorning,anditwaseightintheeveningnow.Hehadtopreparehislessonsforthefollowingday.ThisisatypicaldayforZhangTian.ComingtoGuizhouProvincetoteachhasbeenquiteanexperienceforhim.学科网（北京）股份有限公司
3ZhangTiangraduatedfromuniversityandgotateacher'scertificatelastyear.Hisparents,likemost,hopedhewouldgotoabigcitytofindateachingjob.Likewise,hisfriendsalllefthishometownforworkinShanghaiorBeijing.ZhangTianfeltdifferently,however.Hewantedtostartanewlifestyle.Hehadmetwonderfulteachersfromsmallvillagesduringhisearlyschoolyearsandhewasinspiredbythemtogoandteachwherehewasneededthemost.Forthatreasonheappliedforandbecameavolunteerteacherinavillageschool.Bringingwithhimlotsofbooks,clothes,andtwopairsoftrainers,ZhangTiantravelledtothevillagewithaneagerheart.Heimaginedallsortsofexcitingthingsaboutlivingindependentlyandteachinginavillage.However,noteverythingliveduptoZhangTian'shopes.TheschoolhadjustthreeteachersandZhangTianwastheonlyEnglishteacher.TheothertwolocalteacherswereresponsibleformathsandChinese.Theschoolwasmuchsmallerthanhehadexpected,withonlythreeclassrooms.Infrontoftheclassrooms,therewasaplaygroundwhichgotdustyonwindydaysandmuddyonrainydays.Livinginthevillagewasalsomorechallengingthanhehadthought.Thepowerandwatersupplieswereunstable,sohecouldonlyshowereverythreeorfourdays,andhehadtolearnhowtocook.本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了大学毕业生张天在贵州一所乡村小学支教的情况，生活工作条件都很差，以及他决定留下来之后的工作。【续写范文】Thethoughtofleavingonceflashedthroughhismind.Ifhereturnedtobigcities,hewouldlivecomfortablyandgethighlypaidandhisparentswouldbehappy.Buthegaveitupandmanagedtofindwaystodealwiththechallenges.Tomakeschcoollifecolorfulforhisstudents,ZhangTianintroducedmoreinterestingsubjectssuchasmusic,arts,geography.Toughaslifeis,hehasenjoyedwiththechildren.WhatmakeshimmostsatisfiedisthathisstudentsareabletoreadspeakandwriteinEnglishandbecomeconfidentinlearningthelanguage.Thevillagerstreatshimasoneofthem.ZhangTian'sfirstserviceyearisalmostover.Whatshouldhedonext?Hecanchoosetoreturntobigcitieswherehecanachievehisvalue.However,lookingattheeyesofthechildrenandthinkingthepoorlifeofthevillagers,hedecidestodosomethingmore.Heiscontentthathecanmakeadifferencetotheirlife.Hehasbeenthinkingtocontactcharityorganizationsforhelp.Andhewillteachvillagershowtoselllocalproductsonlinesothattheycanimprovetheirlivingconditions,whichhethinkswillbeofbenefittochildren'slife.Afteralongconsideration,hechoosestostayforanotheryear.Atleastnow,hewantstostay.Maybenextyearhewillchoosetoleave.Whoknows?【范文译文】学科网（北京）股份有限公司
4离开的念头一度闪过他的脑海。如果他回到大城市，他会生活得很舒适，收入很高，他的父母也会很高兴。但他放弃了，并设法找到了应对挑战的方法。为了让学生的校园生活丰富多彩，张田引入了更多有趣的课程，如音乐、艺术、地理。虽然生活艰难，但他和孩子们相处得很愉快。让他最满意的是，他的学生能够用英语读、说、写，并对学习这门语言充满信心。村民们把他当成自己人。张天的第一个服务年就要结束了。他下一步该怎么做?他可以选择回到大城市，在那里他可以实现自己的价值。然而，看着孩子们的眼睛，想到村民们贫困的生活，他决定做更多的事情。他为自己能改变他们的生活而感到满足。他一直在考虑联系慈善机构寻求帮助。他还将教村民们如何在网上销售当地产品，这样他们就可以改善生活条件，他认为这将有利于孩子们的生活。经过长时间的考虑，他选择再呆一年。至少现在，他想留下来。也许明年他会选择离开。谁知道呢?4.【原文内容】Myschoolhadatraditionduringtheninth-gradegraduation:abeautifulgoldandgreenjacket(theschoolcolors),wasawardedtothestudentwhohadmaintainedthehighestgradesfornineyears.IhadbeenastraightAstudentsincethefirstgradeandhadlookedforwardsverymuchtoowningthatjacket.Myfatherwasafarmlaborerwhocouldn'tearnenoughmoneytofeedfivechildren.Iwasgiventomygrandparentstoraise.Therewouldneverbeaschoolsportsjacketforus.Thisscholarshipjacketwasmyonlychance.OnedayinMay,Ihappenedtooverhearintheoffice.Mr.Schmidt,myhistoryteacher,andMr.Boone,mymathteacherarguingaboutme.“Irefusetodoit!Idon'tcarewhoherfatheris；hergradescan'tmatchMartha'satall.Iwon'tlieorfalsify(伪造)records.”saidMr.Schmidtangrily.ButMr.Boone'svoicesoundedcalm.“Joann'sfatherisnotonlyontheBoard(董事会),heownstheonlystoreintown:wecouldsayitwasaclosetieand…”Shakingandsad,I,waitedafewminutesandwalkedaway.Thenextdaywhentheprincipalcalledmeintohisoffice.“Martha,”hesaid,“There'sbeenachangeinpolicythisyearregardingthescholarshipjacket.ThisyeartheBoardhasdecidedtochargefifteendollars,whichstillwon'tcoverthecompletecostofthejacket.Soifyouareunabletopaythemoneyforthejacket,itwillbegiventothenextoneinline.”StandingwithallthedignityIcouldfind,Isaid，“I'llspeaktomygrandfatheraboutit,sir,andletyouknowtomorrow.”Icriedonthewayhome.本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的学校在九年级的毕业典礼上会奖励一件漂亮的金绿色的夹克给9年来成绩最好的学生，作者一直是优等生，渴望得到那件夹克，但是偶然听到Mr.Schmidt老师和校长争论夹克到底给她还是Joann。后来祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫奖。校长最后也把夹克奖给了作者。【续写范文】BythetimeIgothome,myeyeswereredandswollen.Ifoundmygrandpainthe学科网（北京）股份有限公司
5beanfield.Sensingsomethingwrong,heaskedmewhathappenedwithgreatconcern.Imurmuredtheprincipal’swords,asurgeofregretgnawingatmyheart.Ireallyhatedtoseemygray-hairedGrandpa’sdisappointment.Grandpa’seyesroundedindisbelief.Timetickingby,heheavedalongsigh,“Mychild,anawardboughtcan’tbecalledanaward.”Inoddedunderstandingly.ButwhoknewhowreluctantandbitterIwas?Idraggedintotheprincipal’sofficethenextday,sadanddisappointed.Myheadstillliftedwithdignity,Itriedtofightbackthetears,stammering,“Icannot…affordthejacket,sir.”Staringintomyeyes,theprincipalsuddenlygrinned,“Ihavegoodnewsforyou.”Ilookedathiminconfusion.“Theboarddecidedthatanawardcannotbeboughtjustforthesakeofwinners’dignity.”Hiseyesbrimmedwithsmiles.IpinchedmyhandonlytofindIwasnotdreaming.OnlyatthatmomentdidIbelievethatMr.Schmidtandmygrandpawereright:nevercanawardsbefalsifiedorbought.【范文译文】当我回到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。我在豆地里找到了爷爷。他觉得有点不对劲，就非常关切地问我发生了什么事。我喃喃地念着校长的话，一股悔恨之情涌上心头。我真不愿意看到白发苍苍的爷爷失望的样子。爷爷的眼睛睁得圆圆的，不相信。时间一分一秒地过去了，他长叹了一口气:“孩子，买的奖不能叫奖。”我理解地点了点头。但谁知道我是多么的不情愿和痛苦?第二天，我拖着沉重的脚步走进校长办公室，心里既难过又失望。我仍然昂首挺胸，强忍着泪水，结结巴巴地说:“先生，我买不起这件夹克。”校长盯着我的眼睛，突然咧嘴一笑，“我有个好消息要告诉你。”我困惑地看着他。“董事会决定，不能为了获奖者的尊严而购买奖项。”他的眼里充满了微笑。我捏了捏手，才发现不是在做梦。只有在那一刻，我才相信施密特和我爷爷是对的:奖项永远不可能被伪造或收买。学科网（北京）股份有限公司
