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考点27非应用文写作:演讲稿、新闻报道(解析版)【命题解读】短文类写作包括通知、倡议书、演讲稿、新闻报道、日记、约稿、宣传稿等类别。以下对发言稿(演讲稿)、新闻报道类别提供对应的模板和基本写作技巧。演讲稿【布局思维导图】【基本模板】Dear______(称谓)Itisagreathonorformetostandheretodeliver/addressaspeech.Mytopictodayis______(主题).Thereisnodoubtthat______(陈述自己的观点).However,______(陈述问题),whichgivesriseto______(问题结果).Toremedythesituation,westudentsneedtospringintoaction.Wearesupposedto______(建议一).Dodearinmindthat______(建议二).That’sall.Thankyou!备注:演讲稿有邀请稿,欢送词,感谢搞等等,根据题目要求适当改写。此模版只适用于谈论观点的类型,如果有感谢类或者欢送辞之类的,可参考感谢信相关表达等等。【写作实操技巧】假定你是李华,你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。请你写一篇关于倡议养成健康生活习惯的演讲稿,内容包括:1.演讲的主题;2.健康生活习惯的重要性;学科网(北京)股份有限公司
13.2—3条健康生活习惯的建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】Dearteachersandfellowstudents(称谓)Itisagreathonorformetostandheretoaddressaspeech.Mytopictodayishealthylivinghabits(主题).Thereisnodoubtthathealthylivinghabitscankeepusfit,protectusfromgettingillandhelpusstartanewdaywithfullenergy(陈述自己的观点).However,soheavyisstudents' presentacademicpressurethatthemajorityofpupilsfailtoworkoutregularly(陈述问题),whichgivesrisetoobesityandpoorhealth(问题结果).Toremedythesituation,westudentsneedtospringintoaction.Wearesupposedtotakefreshfruits,meatandvegetables,andavoideatingtoomanysnackfoods(建议一).Dodearinmindthatsetaside adequate timefordailyexercisewouldcontributealottoourhealth(建议二).That’sall.Thankyou!【仿写演练】假定你是李华,要准备一篇演讲稿参加年级的英语演讲比赛。作为高三的学生,虽然有很大的学习压力,也应常帮助父母做家务。请你以自己的亲身经历说明适当帮助父母做家务的好处。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网(北京)股份有限公司
2_________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】Dearteachersandfellowstudents(称谓)Itisagreathonorformetostandheretoaddressaspeech.Mytopictodayisthemeritsofwork(主题).Thereisnodoubtthatseniorthreestudentsareundergreatstudypressure(陈述自己的观点).However,itcan’tbethereasonwhywedon’thelpourparentswithsomehousework(陈述问题),whichgivesrisetoincreasingburdenofourparents(问题结果).LastSunday,Ifelttiredwithmystudyandwasinlowspiritsintheafternoon.Seeingmymotherbusywiththehousework,Idecidedtohelphercleanthehouse.Almosttwohourslater,thehousetookonabrightlook.AlthoughIwaswetwithsweatsfeltdelightedandproud(自己的经历).Wecanbenefitalotfromdoinghousework.Theburdenofourparentscanberelieved.Also,wecanrelaxourselvesanddevelopourlifeskillsaswell(感受).That’sall.Thankyou!新闻报道【布局思维导图】【基本模板】______(标题)______(时间或地点)saw/witnessed______(活动).Aimedat______(活动目的),thisactivitywaswellreceivedinthewholeschool.______(参与者)tookanactivepartintheactivity.The______(活动)providedaplatformforallthestudentsto______(活动内容一).Mostimpressively,______(活动内容二).Withthestudents'activeparticipation andteachers'enthusiasticsupport,the______(活动)wasundoubtedlyasuccess.(Thisactivitywashighlyspokenofbystudents,foritmotivatedthemto______(影响).)学科网(北京)股份有限公司
3【必备词句】【常用词汇】1.bepresent(at)出席2.beabsentfrom.缺席3.expressone’sopinion表达某人的观点4.choosesb.as.选择某人作为……5.attendalecture/meeting听课/参会6.givealecture/speech做讲座/演讲7.takepartin/participateinanactivity参加活动8.beexpectedtodo..被期待做某事;有望做某事9.incase(of)以防/万一10.beorganizedby.由……组织11.willbeheld/betobeheld将被举行12.beaimed/intendedtodo.打算……,意图是13.withtheaim/intention/purposeof.目标是……14.signup/signupfor/registerfor签到/报名参加15.beinvitedto.被邀请去……16.bringsth.withsb.某人带来某物17.berequiredtodo.被要求做……18.takenotes做笔记19.informsb.ofsth./tellsb.aboutsth.告知某人某事20.takemeasures/steps/action采取措施【常用句型】1.Hello,everybody/everyone.2.Ladiesandgentlemen,mayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.3.Attention,please!Ihavesomethingimportanttotellyou.4.Therewillbeaparty/speech/contestheldby...5.Inorderto...,theStudentUnionwillorganize...6.Therewillbecolourfulactivitiesthen,suchas...7.Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequiredtoattendit.8.Thosewhoareinterestedintheactivityarewelcome.9.Pleasecomeandjoininit.Everyoneiswelcomtoattendit.10.Pleasecomeontimeanddon’tbelate.11.Ibelieveyouwillhaveawonderfultimethen.12.That'sall.Thankyou.学科网(北京)股份有限公司
4【写作实操技巧】假定你是学校英语杂志社记者,上周你校开展了给贫困地区学生捐赠“爱心包裹”的活动。请写一篇新闻报道。内容包括:1.活动时间与地点;2.活动过程;3.活动意义。注意:①词数80词左右;②可适当增加细节,使行文连贯; ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】LovingParcelsforStudentsinNeed(标题)Lastweek(时间或地点)witnessedour“LovingParcels”donationactivityatourschool(活动).Aimedathelpingthestudentsinthepoverty-strickenareas(活动目的),thisactivitywaswellreceivedinthewholeschool.Alloftheteachersandstudents(参与者)tookanactivepartintheactivity.Theactivity(活动)providedaplatformforallthestudentstodonatetheirclothes,booksandschoolbagstothestudentsinneed(活动内容一).Mostimpressively,theyalsowrotedownthebestwishesoncards,whichwouldbecollectedanddeliveredtotheschoolsinthepoorareas(活动内容二).Withthestudents'activeparticipation andteachers'enthusiasticsupport,thedonation(活动)wasundoubtedlyasuccess.【仿写演练】新华中学近期组织了校园劳动周(CampusLaborWeek)活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括:1.活动的时间与地点;2.活动的过程;3.你的评论。 注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________学科网(北京)股份有限公司
5______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【模板范文】CampusLaborWeek(标题)Ourschool(时间或地点)witnesseda“CampusLaborWeek”activityfromMay15thto19th(活动).Aimedatenhancingstudents’physicalquality(活动目的),thisactivitywaswellreceivedinthewholeschool.Alloftheteachersandstudents(参与者)tookanactivepartintheactivity.Theactivity(活动)providedaplatformforallthestudentstoappreciatelecturesonlaborskillsgivenonthefirstday,fromwhichtheybenefittedalot(活动内容一).Mostimpressively,Varietiesofotherlaborprojectsgavethemunforgettableexperiences(活动内容二).Withthestudents'activeparticipation andteachers'enthusiasticsupport,notonlycanthiseventenrichstudents’schoollife,butalsoofferthemopportunitiestolearnmoredailypracticalskills.Itwasundoubtedlyasuccess.【真题1】(2021年浙江卷)假定你是李华,下周有新西兰学生访问你校,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.介绍活动安排;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【参考范文】Distinguishedguests:Onbehalfofourschool,Iwouldliketoconveymysincerewelcomeforyourvisiting.Atfirst,itisofsignificancetofullyunderstandtheschool.Asscheduled,allofyouwillvisitthemuseum,whichcontainsthesplendidhistoryofourschool.Furthermore,ourclassesareworthyofbeingattended,becauseyoucanappreciatethedifferencesbetweenChineseandwesternteachingmethods.Afterthat,itisatcanteenthatyoucanhaveaspeciallunchwithourstudents.Asmentionedabove,Iextremelyexpectyourcoming.Mayyouhaveanunforgettableexperience.【真题2】(2021年6月浙江卷)昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.观展感受;3.推荐观展。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。学科网(北京)股份有限公司
6【参考范文】lnordertoenrichstudents’after-schoollife,anexhibitionofstudents'traditionalChinesepaintingsisbeingheldbyourschool,whichsparksagrowinglovefortraditionalart.Theexhibitionisheldonthefirstflooroftheschoollitrary.Mostofthestudentsthinkhighlyofthisexhibition,whichprovidesaplatformforthemtoexplorethebeautyofChinaandexperiencethecharmofChineseart.Throughtheexhibition,notonlycanyouadmirewonderfulpictures,butalsoenableyouunderstandtheartoftraditionalChinesepaintingbetter.Theexhibitionwilllastfortwoweeks,everystudentiswelcometovisit.【真题3】(2016·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。l回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);l谈谈收获或感想;l表达祝愿与期望。注意:词数不少于100;可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dearfriends,Howtimeflies!Thankyou.【参考范文】Dearfriends, Howtimeflies! Twoweekshavepassedsinceyoucametoourschoolfortheexchangeprogram,whichweallhavebenefitedfrom.Duringthesetwoweeks,wehavestudiedandlivedtogether,whichgivesustheopportunitytopromoteourfriendship.Doingsportsasateamhasenabledustoknoweachotherbetter.Yourartskillsareexcellentandadmirable,whichleavesmeadeepimpression.Ithinkallourclassmateshavelearnedalotfromourcommunicationandthevariousactivities.学科网(北京)股份有限公司
7Now,onbehalfofmyschoolmates,Iwishyouasafereturn.Ialsohopethattherewillbemoreeventsofthiskindinthefuture.Thankyou.【真题4】(2014·江西高考真题)假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“Whattolearninseniorhighschool?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1.学会学习:方法,习惯等;2.学会做人:真诚,友善;3.学会其他:考生自拟。注意:1.词数120左右;2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不须抄在答题卡上,不计入总次数。Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【参考范文】Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonourtobeheretosharewithmyopinionsonwhattolearninseniorhighschool.Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.First,weshouldlearntolearnefficiently.Personally,Iusedtotryeffectivemethodtoachievemyacademicgoals.Developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance.Itreallybenefitedmealottopreviewlessons,getactivelyinvolvedinclass,andreviewwhathadbeentaughtafterclass.Inaddition,weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Inschool,Irespectedteachersandwasfriendlywithclassmates.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.Finally,weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdoorsactivitiesfrequently.Theywerereallyhelpfultobuildupmybodyandenrichmyschoollife.Nopainsnogains.Iamsurethatwithgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfulandfruitfullifehere.Thankyou!【真题5】(2020·山东卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员:2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3.活动反响。注意:学科网(北京)股份有限公司
81.写作词数应为80左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessarilyhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.【真题6】(2013年江西卷)(星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:1.时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);2.活动的过程;3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意:1.词数120左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】An Impressive Mountain-ClaimingIn order to help us students to keep fit and promote wills, our school organized a mountain-climbing on Aprial 10 and we recieved much fun and benefit.It was a nice day, the sunlight warm and soft.At round 9 a.m., we gatheredat the foot of Daqing Mountain in high spirits, well-equipped for the tough journey to thedestination-the top of the mountaiin. Despite the hardship, we were singing and laughing allthe way, enjoying the the fresh air and the beautiful views. When some students fell behind orgot into trouble, others would come to their aid. At around 11 a.m., we all arrived at thesummit of Daqing Mountain. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with great joy.学科网(北京)股份有限公司
9This outdoors activity is really impressive and beneficial. Not only did it get us closer to thenature and relieve pressure form us, it also promote the friendship among us.【模拟检测1】(2022·浙江·三模)假定你是星光中学的高中优秀毕业生李华,母校英语供乐都将为高一新生举办主题为“Howtoexpandyourvocabulary?“的英语沙龙活动。请你准备一份英语发言稿,英语内包括:1.具体建议,如:坚持阅读等:2.自身经历:3.期望和祝福.注意,1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Goodmorning,everyone!Itismyhonortobeheretosharewithyoumyopinionsonhowtoexpandyourvocabulary.Asforme,readingregularlyisthekey.Isuggestthatyouchooseaproperreadingmaterialandkeepreadingiteveryday.IrememberbookingEnglishWeeklyeachterm,whichhelpedmequicklyaccumulateusefulwords.Besides,asmallnotebookfornewwordsishighlyrecommended,enablingyoutocopynewwordsandrecitethenconveniently.Thankyou!Lookingforwardtoyourprogressinhighschool!【解析】本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生写一篇主题为“Howtoexpandyourvocabulary?”的发言稿,内容包括:1.具体建议,如:坚持阅读等;2.自身经历;3.期望和祝福。【详解】1.词汇积累扩大:expand→enlarge关键:key→point建议:suggest→advise合适的:proper→appropriate学科网(北京)股份有限公司
102.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Besides,asmallnotebookfornewwordsishighlyrecommended,enablingyoutocopynewwordsandrecitethenconveniently.拓展句:Besides,asmallnotebookfornewwordsishighlyrecommended,whichenablesyoutocopynewwordsandrecitethenconveniently.【点睛】【高分句型1】Isuggestthatyouchooseaproperreadingmaterialandkeepreadingiteveryday.(运用了that引导宾语从句)【高分句型2】IrememberbookingEnglishWeeklyeachterm,whichhelpedmequicklyaccumulateusefulwords.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)【模拟检测2】(2022·福建漳州·二模)你参加了你校外文社举行的英语趣配音比赛(FunnyVoiceActing),你将代表获奖的学生在颁奖会上发言。请你写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.活动评价:2.收获及感想。注意:1.词数80左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Goodmorning,everyone!______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【参考范文】Goodmorning,everyone!IfeelhonoredtosharemyfeelingsonbehalfofthewinnersintheFunnyVoiceActing.WhatIhaveharvestedmostfromthecontestisnottheawardbuttheimprovementofmypronunciationandthefunofacting.Byimitatingthetoneandintonationofactorsoractresses,wehavemadegreatprogressinouroralEnglish.TheFunnyVoiceActingisagreatsuccess.NotonlydoesitenrichourschoollifebutalsomotivateourpassiontolearnEnglishwell.Isincerelyappreciatethechancetopromoteourability.Thankyou!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,代表外文社举行的英语趣配音比赛中获奖的学生在颁奖会上发言。【详解】学科网(北京)股份有限公司
111.词汇积累荣幸的:honored→privileged比赛:contest→competition激发:motivate→stimulate真诚地:sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:TheFunnyVoiceActingisagreatsuccess.NotonlydoesitenrichourschoollifebutalsomotivateourpassiontolearnEnglishwell.拓展句:TheFunnyVoiceActingisagreatsuccess,whichnotonlyenrichesourschoollifebutalsomotivatesourpassiontolearnEnglishwell.【点睛】[高分句型1]WhatIhaveharvestedmostfromthecontestisnottheawardbuttheimprovementofmypronunciationandthefunofacting.(运用了what引导的主语从句)[高分句型2]NotonlydoesitenrichourschoollifebutalsomotivateourpassiontolearnEnglishwell.(运用了部分倒装句)【模拟检测3】(2022·安徽·芜湖一中一模)你校正在组织一场英语演讲比赛。请以ValuePEclasses为主题,自拟标题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:1.体育课的重要性;2.部分学生忽视体育课的现状;3.你的建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Hello,everyone!Myfriends,let'sattachgreatimportancetoPEclasses!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ValuePEclassesHello,everyone!Physicaleducation,oneofthefivedimensionsofeducation,isanimportantcomponentofqualityeducation.AsamajorcarrierofPE,PEclassescanundoubtedlybringusnumerousbenefits,suchas学科网(北京)股份有限公司
12cultivatingphysicalqualities,strengtheningteamspiritanddeepeningtheconceptoflifelongexercise.Unfortunately,somestudentsignorePEclasses,duringwhichtheysimplyburythemselvesinhomeworkorjustidlethetimeaway.Whatapity!It'shightimewevaluedandactivelyparticipatedinPEclasses.Weshouldnotonlydophysicalexercisebutlearnsportsknowledge.Onlyinthiswaycanweestablishgoodexercisinghabitsandaccumulatesportsculture,thuslayingasolidfoundationforlifelongsportsandthespreadofChineseculture.Myfriends,let'sattachgreatimportancetoPEclasses!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校正在组织一场英语演讲比赛。请以ValuePEclasses为主题,自拟标题写一篇发言稿参赛。【详解】1.词汇积累培养:develop→cultivate部分:part→component打发时间:killtime→idletimeaway重要性:significance→importance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Physicaleducation,oneofthefivedimensionsofeducation,isanimportantcomponentofqualityeducation.拓展句:Physicaleducation,whichisoneofthefivedimensionsofeducation,isanimportantcomponentofqualityeducation.【点睛】[高分句型1]AsamajorcarrierofPE,PEclassescanundoubtedlybringusnumerousbenefits,suchascultivatingphysicalqualities,strengtheningteamspiritanddeepeningtheconceptoflifelongexercise.(运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaycanweestablishgoodexercisinghabitsandaccumulatesportsculture,thuslayingasolidfoundationforlifelongsportsandthespreadofChineseculture.(运用了部分倒装)【模拟检测4】(2022·江西南昌·一模)你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Beawisereader”为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:1.阅读的重要性;2.提出建议。注意:1.词数100词左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。学科网(北京)股份有限公司
13__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Onepossibleversion:Goodmorning,everyone.It’smyhonortostandheretosharewithyoumyopiniononreading.Frommypointofview,readingisreallybeneficialtous.Itcanbroadenourvision.Thecontentinthebookscontainstheknowledgeallovertheworldandeveryaspect,whichcanmakeusalearnedman.Inaddition,readingcanhelptocultivateourconfidencethatisvitalonthewaytosuccessandthefulfillmentofalifelongdream.Tomyunderstanding,ifyouwanttobeagoodreader,youcanstartwiththebooksyouareinterestedin,sparetimeoutofyourbusyscheduleanddevelopthehabitofreading.Itistruethatactionsspeaklouderthanwords.Let’sdothistogether!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“Beawisereader”为题写一篇发言稿参加你校将举办的英语演讲比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累荣幸:honor→privilege有益的:beneficial→helpful在某人看来:fromone'spointofview→asfarassb.beconcerned此外:inaddition→what'smore2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:Frommypointofview,readingisreallybeneficialtous.Itcanbroadenourvision.拓展句:Frommypointofview,reading,whichcanbroadenourvisionisreallybeneficialtous.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thecontentinthebookscontainstheknowledgeallovertheworldandeveryaspect,whichcanmakeusalearnedman.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Inaddition,readingcanhelptocultivateourconfidencethatisvitalonthewaytosuccessandthefulfillmentofalifelongdream.(运用了that引导的定语从句)学科网(北京)股份有限公司
14【模拟检测5】(2022·辽宁·东北育才学校二模)假如你是李华,你校近期举行了以ThePowerofSports为主题的英文演讲大赛,请你为学校英文报写一篇新闻报道,要点如下:1.赛程回顾2.赛后反响注意:1.词数80词左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LastMonday,ourschoolheldanEnglishspeakingcontest.ThethemeofthecontestisThePowerofSports.Manystudentsinourschoolactivelyparticipatedinthecontest.Duringthecontest,studentsexpressedtheadvantagesofsportsbytellingustheirownexperiences.Whengivingspeeches,theywerefullofenthusiasm.Attheendofthecontest,ourheadmasterpresentedprizestothetopthreestudentswhohadwonthecontest.Everystudentenjoyedthemselvesinthecontest.NotonlydidtheypracticetheiroralEnglish,buttheyknewthepowerofsports.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为学校英文报写一篇新闻报道,报道你校近期举行的以ThePowerofSports为主题的英文演讲大赛,内容包括:赛程回顾;赛后反响。【详解】1.词汇积累比赛:contest→competition参加:participatein→takepartin好处:advantage→benefit充满:befullof→befilledwith2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:LastMonday,ourschoolheldanEnglishspeakingcontest.ThethemeofthecontestisThePowerofSports.拓展句:LastMonday,ourschoolheldanEnglishspeakingcontest,thethemeofwhichisThePowerofSports.【点睛】[高分句型1]Whengivingspeeches,theywerefullofenthusiasm.(运用了when引导的状语从句的省略)[高分句型2]Attheendofthecontest,ourheadmasterpresentedprizestothetopthreestudentswhohadwonthecontest.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)学科网(北京)股份有限公司
15[高分句型3]NotonlydidtheypracticetheiroralEnglish,buttheyknewthepowerofsports.(notonly…butalso连接句子时,notonly位于句首,该部分用部分倒装)【模拟检测6】(2022·山西省长治市第二中学校模拟预测)为了增强学生的劳动意识,你校组织学生改造了校园内的一处废弃花园。请你就此给校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动时间与地点;2.活动内容(除草、种花等);3.活动的意义。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Toimprovestudents’awarenessofmanuallabor,ourschoollaunchedanactivitytorebuildadesertedgardenoncampuslastFriday.Over60studentsfromeachclasstookanactivepartintheactivity,someweedingtheflowerbeds,somesowingseedsandotherswateringthegarden.Ourschoolwillsetasidesomeareasthathavenotbeenusedforsometimeandmakethemsuitableforstudentstoexperiencedifferentformsoflaborinthefuture.Theprojectoffersstudentsanopportunitytoconnectwiththenaturalworldandrespectlife.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则关于学校劳动活动的报道。【详解】1.词汇积累积极参加:takeanactivepartin→participateinactively适合的:suitable→proper/appropriate机会:opportunity→chance联系:connectwith→haveaconnectionwith2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Toimprovestudents’awarenessofmanuallabor,ourschoollaunchedanactivitytorebuildadesertedgardenoncampuslastFriday.拓展句:Aimingtoimprovestudents’awarenessofmanuallabor,ourschoollaunchedanactivitytorebuilda学科网(北京)股份有限公司
16desertedgardenoncampuslastFriday.【点睛】【高分句型1】Over60studentsfromeachclasstookanactivepartintheactivity,someweedingtheflowerbeds,somesowingseedsandotherswateringthegarden.(运用了独立主格结构作方式状语)【高分句型2】Ourschoolwillsetasidesomeareasthathavenotbeenusedforsometimeandmakethemsuitableforstudentstoexperiencedifferentformsoflaborinthefuture.(运用了that引导限制性定语从句)学科网(北京)股份有限公司