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1、智课网TOEFL备考资料如何让TOEFL写作水平更上一层楼1.用词不当原：Theabsenceofgroupworkisadisasterforteenagersinmodernsociety.改：Theabsenceofteamworkisadisasterforteenagersinmodernsociety.评：groupwork是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。原：Youwillbedangerousifyoukeepmovingwithou

2、taclearviewofthewholepicture.改：Youwillbeindangerifyoukeepmovingwithoutaclearviewofthewholepicture.评：dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的，有危险性的”，而beindanger才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢?原：Firstly,thejob,providingtheopportunityforstudentstoutilizewhattheylearnedinclass,mighteffecttheirfurtherdevelopment.改：First

3、ly,thejob,providingtheopportunityforstudentstoutilizewhattheylearnedinclass,mightaffecttheirfurtherdevelopment.评：模样长得像，意思可不同了。这里想用动词affect表示“影响”，却误写为名词effect“效果”，一字千里啊!2.搭配错误原：Nowadays,peoplearecrazypursuingtobeexcellent.改：Nowadays,peoplearecrazyaboutexcellence.评：这位同学显然记错了becrazyaboutsth.

4、这个用法，写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。原：Besides,publicspeechcaneffectivelyincreaseyourcommunicationskills,whichfacilitateyoursalesmancareer.改：Besides,publicspeechcaneffectivelyimproveyourcommunicationskills,whichfacilitateyoursalesmancareer.评：此处是一个明显的动宾搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是improvetheskills，而不是increasetheskills。3

5、.词性错位原：Iwillforgetmysadandpressurefromtheworkandthestudy.改：Iwillforgetmysadnessandpressurefromworkandstudy.评：sad是形容词，而这里明显需要一个名词，应该是sadness。原：Althoughmakingmoneyisapriorityformostpeople,spendingtimewiththefamilyisequalsignificant.改：…,spendingtimewiththefamilyisequallysignificant.评：形容词sign

6、ificant前需要用副词来修饰，所以equal应该改成equally。4.时态混乱原：AlthoughIhavenoworkexperiencewhenIwasateenager,Ialwaysdreamedabouthavingajob.改：AlthoughIhadnoworkexperiencewhenIwasateenager,Ialwaysdreamedabouthavingajob.评：过去时的句子中冒出了现在时，同学你太粗心了，要仔细检查哦~原：Iwouldexplainmyviewinthefollowingparagraphs.改：I’dliketoex

7、plain…/Iwillexplain…评：可能是两种说法记混了吧，结果把时态搞错了……5.主谓不一致原：Thewaywedealwiththeenvironmentalproblemsarecrucialtotheprosperityofhuman-being.改：Thewaywedealwiththeenvironmentalproblemsiscrucialtotheprosperityofhuman-being.评：谓语之前有两个名词时，主谓搭配的问题就常常出现了。这里真正的主语应该是单数名词theway，所以与之搭配