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1、续写--惊慌篇安慰篇惊慌篇1.Rigowasalittlenervous,loweringhisheadandcouldn'thelptrembling,butheforcedhimselfnottopanic.2.Sensingmystressandfearoftheunknown,hetriedtomakemelaugh.感知到我对未来的紧张和担忧,...3.Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.舌头打结手心出汗4.Af
2、loodoftensionwelledupinhim./Tensionfloodedoverhim.5.Hisheartbeatwildlyandhislegstrembled,feelinghisthroattightened.感到嗓子发紧6.Scaredandnervous,shewasfrozentothespot.安慰篇词组:1.patsb.ontheshoulder2.looksb.gentlyintheeyes3.castcomfortingglanceatsb.4.hug/holdsb.i
3、none'sarms句子:1.Hedidn'tsayaword,butsmiledawaterysmileandheldmyhandstightly.2.Shestroked(轻抚)herfingersthroughmyhair,andsaid,”Thingsaregoingtobefine.”3.Thewomanwasstaringtenderly(和善温柔地atthegirl,wipingouttearsfromhercheek.4.Seeinghercondition,Iimmediatelyfe
4、ltahugesurge(汹涌)ofsympathyforher.Itwascomingdeepfromwithinmyheart.Para.TimePlacePlotEmotionPara.1apastexperienceairport3hourslatergottothe…watched…setmyluggageontheairportsidewalkWhy?--anxious:myanxietyhadjustbegunPara.2terminalof…myfirstvisitalone-unfam
5、iliarhadtofindhelp-couldn’tbelateanxious+panicPara.3triedbutinvainanotherbus–followedanxious–awful-hopefulPara.4elevatorsFloor3wasabandonedpressedbutton3nocheck-incountersindespairhelplesshopelessPara.5TearsformedinmyeyesasIsawtheemptyhallandrealizedthat
6、Iwouldmissmyplane.点1点21.I–失望难过—表现2.老人见到—安慰-主动提出帮助Para.6WhenIturnedtothankhimforallhishelp,hewasgone.点1点2I–遗憾心怀感激从中学到什么?读原文(一个中心两个基本点三条线)预测全文走向(两条线)定结局—读首句定段意-细节刻画Who:WhenWhere:Why:How:I,anairportemployeeBeforetakingmyplanehometheterminalairport,theelevat
7、or,thethirdfloorIwasanxious,forthiswasthefirstvisitalonetotheairportThiswasmyvisit__________totheinternationalterminaloftheairport.Nothingwas_________,andIevendidn'tknow_______wasthecheck-in-counter.ItriedtoaskapassingbusinessmanbutfailedbecauseIdidn'tex
8、pressclearly.Anotherbusarrived,I__________allthepassengersandfinallyreachedthe_____________,butIdidn'tmanagetofitinandwas____________again.ThenIgotonit,butIpressedthewrongbutton3.Onthethirdfloor,therewasnocheck-in-countera