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1、EssaywritingtasksBrainstormingandsampleforreferenceCommentsonessay11.theauthordoesnotgivehispositionattheverybeginning,butonlypresentsthegeneralsituationthatpeoplearecloselyconnectedwiththeInternet;2.hegivesalmostequalspacetobothpositions:advantagesanddisadva

2、ntages;3.inthelastparagraph,hegiveshisposition,butitisweakandtoolate.Commentsonessay14.advice:--almostallthetopicsforcompositioninlanguagetestsarecontroversial;thetesteeisexpectedtotakeaclearposition,whichshouldbepresentedasearlyaspossible;--youmayacknowledge

3、thegoodreasonsoftheoppositeposition,butitneedstobeverybrief,betterasaconcession;--mostofthespaceshouldbegiventothereasoningofyourposition.Commentsonessay21.theauthorexpresseshispositionveryclearlyinthefirstparagraph,butitseemstoolong;2.thesecondparagraphisfoc

4、usedonthesupportofhisposition,butcanbefurtherstrengthened;3.thethirdparagraphgivessolutions,furthersupportinghisposition;Commentsonessay24.advice:movethesentence“Inmanyplace…”(inparagraph1)tothebeginningofthesecondparagraph;orstrengthenitabit.Commentsonessay3

5、1.thepositionisclearlyanddirectlypresented;2.theauthorcomparesthetwosystemsinthreewaysonebyone,withemphasisonhisposition;3.theendingseemsabitabrupt.Commentsonessay41.theauthorcomparesthetwosystemsinseveralwaystoshowthatthecomputerizedsystemmaynotbebetter,orev

6、enmoreunreliable.2.onthewholehispositionandreasoningareclear.3.butthelastreasondoesn’tseemstrongenough:ifprocessedmoretimes,willitbereliable?4.again,theendingisabitabrupt.EssaywritingHints:Thetopicinsuchtestsisalwayscontroversial,whichmeansbothpositionshaveth

7、eirowngoodreasons.Theimportantthingisthatyouhaveacleardecision/positionandyoucansupportitsufficiently.Thelanguageneednotbebeautifulorprofound,butitshouldbeclearandgrammaticallycorrect.EssaywritingPointstobeemphasized:1.aclearandfirmposition2.sufficientandconc

8、retesupportingpointsfortheposition3.grammaticallycorrectsentences4.coherenceandcohesionofthediscourse(refertoWritingInput2)Procedures1.Brainstormingingroupsonthegiventopic;thegroupleaderw