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1、(一)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamous  mountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootof  themountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,we

2、fedmonkeys,visitingtemples  andtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicture  sincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly. Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetop ofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasl

3、eepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.（二）Manyteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisionwithyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,manychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabili

4、tytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworries   muchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,all     plannedandwrittenbygr

5、own-upstomakechildrentowant thingsthattheydon'trealneed.      （三）  I’mthecaptainofourschoolteamsowithmy fellowplayerswe’vewonseveralgames.There willanimportantgamenextmonth.Butoneofthe bestplayerinourteamtoldmejustthenthathe wouldn’tplaybasketballoncemo

6、re.Hisparents askedhimtospendinmoretimepreparingforthe  collegeentranceexamination.Ifeelsorrytohim.    Buthisparentsthinkgotocollegeismoreimportant thanplayingsportsandcollegewastheonlyplace forasmartboylikehisson.Somyfriendhadno choice.Hewantedtomaketh

7、eirparentshappy.   (四)WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteEnglish,Iranintomany difficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedher adviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday. 

8、SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwas learningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrote  alittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.