英语改错及答案

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1、(一)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamous  mountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootof  themountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingte

2、mples  andtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicture  sincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly. Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetop ofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.（二）Ma

3、nyteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisionwithyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,manychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworries   muchabouttheradioprogramyoun

4、gpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,all     plannedandwrittenbygrown-upstomakechildrentowant thingsthattheydon'trealneed.      （三）  I’mthecaptainofou

5、rschoolteamsowithmy fellowplayerswe’vewonseveralgames.There willanimportantgamenextmonth.Butoneofthe bestplayerinourteamtoldmejustthenthathe wouldn’tplaybasketballoncemore.Hisparents askedhimtospendinmoretimepreparingforthe  collegeentranceexamination.Ifeelsorrytohim.    Bu

6、thisparentsthinkgotocollegeismoreimportant thanplayingsportsandcollegewastheonlyplace forasmartboylikehisson.Somyfriendhadno choice.Hewantedtomaketheirparentshappy.   (四)WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteEnglish,Iranintomany difficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChinese

7、andtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedher adviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday. SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwas learningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrote  alittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandr

8、eadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.