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1、HomeworkcommentsStudent’sresumewithcommentsStudent’sresumerevisedUnitTwoCampusLoveClaim:Ideaoropinion(主张)Threekindsofclaim:Offact:Isittrue?Ofvalue:Isitgood?Ofpolicy:Whattodo?Identifytheclaimsonp.27-28Whatiswrongwiththeclaimsonp.28-29?1.Itisdifficultfor
2、teenagerstofaceloveandrecoverfromanunsuccessfullove.2.Loveatfirstsightisshort-livedandrisky.3.Maintainingaromanticrelationshipisexpensiveandtime-consuming.4.Cyberromanceissuitableforshy,inward-lookingpeoplealone.5.Womenliveforlovewhilemenliveforsuccess
3、.Useoflanguage:abstractvs.concrete具体词语:表示可通过看听闻触摸直接感觉的事物,如大象、玫瑰、空气抽象词语:不可直接感觉的事物,如和平、自由、抽象、诚实介于两者之间的词语:回答、锻炼、实践概括词和具体词Generalwords:Foragroupofthings.树Specificwords:Foraspecificmemberinagroup.松树Reorderwordsfromgeneraltospecificp.30Whattypeofdictionisuse
4、dinthepassagesonp.30?p.31:Give3concretewordsforeach1.Friendship2.Happiness3.Anger4.Heroism5.povertyp.31:Give3concretewordsforeach1.Friendship:friend,smile,help(?),money2.Happiness:family,marriage,money,house3.Anger:cursing,longface,frown,silent4.Herois
5、m:strong,rushforward,fight5.Poverty:brokenbike,nomoney,nohomeworn-outclothesIsLoveanArt?(pp.31-34)Isloveanart?Thenitrequiresknow-ledgeantdeffort.Orisloveapleasantsensation,whichtoexperienceisamatterofchance,somethingone“fallsinto”ifoneislucky?Thislittl
6、ebookisbasedontheformerpremise,whileundoubtedlythemajorityofpeopletodaybelieveinthelatter.Notthatpeoplethinkthatloveisnotimportant.Theyarestarvedforit.Theywatchendlessfilmsabouthappyandunhappylovestories.Theylistentohundredsofpopularsongs.Yethardlyanyo
7、nethinksthatthereisanythingthatneedstobelearnedaboutlove.Thispeculiarattitudeisbasedonseveralpremiseswhicheithersinglyorcombinedtendtoupholdit.Lovingvs.BeingLovedFirst,mostpeopleseetheproblemofloveprimarilyasthatofbeinglovedratherthanofloving,ofone’sca
8、pacityoflove.Hence,theproblemtothemishowtobeloved,howtobelovable.Inpursuitofthisaimtheyfollowseveralpaths.One,whichisessentiallyusedbymen,istobesuccessful,tobeaspowerfulandrichasthesocialmarginofone’spositionpermits.Another,usedespecial