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1、话说宝玉在林黛玉房屮说“耗了精“，宝钗撞来，讽刺宝玉元宵不知“绿蜡“Z典，三人正在房中互相讥刺取笑。杨宪益：Pao-yu,aswesaw,wasinTai-yu'sroomtellingherthestoryabouttheratspiritswhenPao-chaiburstinandteasedhimforforgettingtheugreenwax”allusiononthenightoftheFeastofLanterns.霍克斯：WehaveshownhowBao-yuwasinDai-yu^r

2、oomtellingherthestoryofthemagicmice;howBao-ChaiburstinonthemandtwittedBao-yuwithhisfailuretorememberthe4greenwax5allusiononthenightoftheLanternFestival;andhowthethreeofthemsatteasingeachotherwithgood-humoredbanter.对比分析：杨宪益和霍克斯在翻译“耗了精”采用来了不同的处理方法，前者使用了异化”r

3、atspirits”，后者用的是归化法”magicmice",使用归化法更受英美读者的亲乃。但是二者同时采川了增译法，增添了thestory,氐文并没冇。在翻译“宝k不知绿烛之典”的“不知”，英文1用的是“forgetting”，而译文2川的绘“withfailureto”，显然译文2更符合英美的表达习惯。那宝玉正恐黛玉饭后贪眠，一时存了食，或夜间定了困，皆非保养身体之法。幸而宝钗走来,大家谈笑，那林黛玉方不欲睡，自己才放了心。杨宪益：Pao-yufeltrelievedastheylaughedandm

4、adefunofeachother,forhehadfearedthatsleepingafterlunchmightgiveTai-yuindigestionorinsomniathatnight,andsoinjureherhealth.LuckilyPao-chai5sarrivalandthelivelyconversationthatfollowedithadwokenTai-yuup.霍克斯:Bao-yuhadbeenafraidthatbysleepingafterhermealDai-yu

5、wouldgiveherselfindigestionorsufferfrominsomniathroughbeinginsufficientlytiredwhenshewenttobedatnight,butBao-chai5sarrivalandthelivelyconversationthatfolloweditbanishedallDai-yu5sdesiretosleepandenabledhimtolayasidehisanxietyonherbehalf.对比分析：译文一对原文语序进行了调整

6、，先说了“放心”，再说“担心”，但并不如不调整顺序的逻辑强。译文二只是用了一个“but”就把原文意思分层了两层，逻辑更加清晰，符合西方人注重逻辑的习惯。原文中的“谈笑”是动词，而两个译文版木都是译的"thelivelyconversation",是名词，体现了汉语重动态，英文重静态的特点。忽听他房屮嚷起来，大家侧耳听了一听，林黛玉先笑道：”这是你妈妈和袭人叫嚷呢。那袭人也罢了，你妈妈再要认真排场她，可见老背晦了。”杨宪益：Justthen,acommotionbrokeoutinPao-yu5sapart

7、mentsandthreeofthemprickeduptheirears.“It'syournannyscoldingHai-jeannouncedTai-yu.“There'snothingwrongwithHai-jen,yetyournannyisforevernaggingather.Oldagehasbefuddledher.”霍克斯:JustthenasuddencommotionarosefromthedirectionofBao-yu'sroomandthethreeofthemstop

8、pedtalkingandturnedtheirheadstolisten.Dai-yuwasthefirsttospeak:“That'syourNanniequarrellingwithAroma,”shesaid.*lbthinkhowthatpoorgirlgoesoutofherwaytobenicetotheoldwoman,yetstillshemanagestofindfaultwithher!Shereall