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1、Sophia如何添加细节描写读后续写微技能指导之二2017.11浙江高考真题回放Para2Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.___________________Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.—Book1“Anne’sBestFriend”Iclosedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loft
2、ymountains,deepvalleysandsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.举例：当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Ifeltvery__________.当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕，嗓子发紧，膝盖发软。Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroat—_______________andmykneesfelt_____________.当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感
3、到很害怕，吓呆了，不敢动弹Atthesightofthefiercewolf,I_________withterror,tooscaredto___________aninch.当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗Atthesightofthefiercewolf,Iwas_________byastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmswere________________表示害怕的心理scaredtightenedweakfrozemoveseizedsweating仿写练习：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她
4、兴奋极了。。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefelt_________.眼睛因兴奋而闪烁。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyes___________withexcitement.激动得心砰砰跳Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwas____________withexcitement..兴奋不能自已Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,
5、awideexcitementtook____________ofher表示兴奋的心理thrilledtwinkledthumpinghold仿写练习：一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。Upon____________thebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.心痛，眼泪直流。Uponhearingthebadnews,herheart_________,tears___________downhercheeks.悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话Uponhearingthebadnews,she,numbwith________,
6、hadtroublespeaking.被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstof__________andcouldn’thelpcrying__________.表示悲伤的心理hearing_achedstreamingsadnessgriefbitterly仿写练习:Tony感到很绝望Tonyfelthopeless_/__________.事故发生后，Tony感觉突然被投入黑暗之中并且陷入绝望Astheresultofanaccident,Tonywassu
7、ddenly—____________aworldofdarknessand______intohopelessness.事故发生后，Tony感觉被遗忘、忽视并且陷入绝望Tonyfelt___________andwasgettingdesperatewithloneliness.托尼被对一切事情充满期待并积极对待的信念所抛弃表示绝望的心理desperatethrownintosankleftoutdesertedTony'sbeliefsinlookingforwardandseeingthepositiveineverything___
8、_______him仿写练习:当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywas____________
