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2、12种高分开头wellbegunishalfdone!一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵,诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头,定会让读者大倒胃口,恹恹欲睡。那么到底在时间紧迫的考场上如何写出靓丽的开头呢?我们此文主要从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来探究。1. AnadverbCarefully,hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass.Joyfullyheskippedupthestreet.Para1:(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:
3、Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.(时间副词衔接+环境描写)2.Anadj.phraseCurioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.Unabletosayaword,hewasrootedtothespot.(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditw
4、asgettingdarkagain.Desperateandhopeless, Jane kneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.(并列情绪形容词)(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingfor assistance.(状态形容词+as/though引导的倒装句)(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:Sud
5、denlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse. (情绪形容词+从句)(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.3.Aparticiple(-in
6、gor–edword)Lookingaroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.Exhausted,hewasgladtheracewasfinallyover.(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Feelingdisappointed,Jane hadtostayaloneforanothernight.(现在分词+情绪形容词)(20
7、16.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para2: ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Feelingrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthe stream tofindthewayout.(现在分词+状态形容词)4. AconjunctionAshewalked,hewhistledAlthoughhewasafraid,hejumpedrightin.5. AprepositionalphraseAttheendofthelanehesuddenlystop
8、ped.Atthesightofthesnake,thelittlegirlscreamedatthetopofhervoice.6. Adialogueoramonologue“Let’sseewhogetstherefirst!”Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomed急速上升pastJenny.“Holdontight!”Myfatheryelled.Wejustfinishedbuckingin猛然弯背跃起asthecoaster雪橇jerkedintomotion.旋转起来Thisw
9、asmyfirstrollercoasterride.(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1: Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim."Getintothecar." PaulshoutedatMac.7