英语写作提高训练----A-Healthy-eating-habit.ppt

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1、AHealthyEatingHabit英语书面表达提高训练Teacher:STEELrewriting请你根据表格中的提示，以AHealthyEatingHabit书面表达noodles,rice,milk,bread,eggsvegetablesfruitfish,meatjunkfood(不利于健康的食物)everyday8-11timesaweek7-9timesaweek3-4timesaweekeatleast为题写一篇短文。要求：1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容2.不少于80个词。11一、审题:明确:是什么(What)？列题纲(outline)1.读要求(dem

2、ands)2.抓中心(graspthemainidea)3.排结构(beginning-body-ending)noodles,rice,milk,bread,eggsvegetablesfruitfish,meatjunkfood(不利于健康的食物)everyday8-11timesaweek7-9timesaweek3-4timesaweekeatleast1.短文必须包括提示中的所有内容。2.不少于80个词。请你根据表格中的提示，以AHealthyEatingHabit为题写一篇短文。要求：二.写作4.Improvingthepassage(合理润饰)1.words(

3、字）noodles….vegetablefruitfish,meatjunkfoodfoodeveryday8-11timesaweek7-9timesaweek3-4timesaweekeatleastFrequency(频率)FourStepsinWriting2.sentences(扩展成句)主------谓------宾(状语）(We)(eathave)food(1).Weshouldeatnoodles….everyday.(5).Weshouldeatthejunkfoodleast.3.paragraphs(组句谋篇)Eg:Reasons:1.Noodles

4、cangiveusenergy(能量)andheat.everyday三、检查找错:1.单句改错1.Weareneedahealthyeatinghabit.2.Becauseitbadforyourhealth.3.Threemealsisveryimportant.4.Youeatssomenoodles.5.Wemusthaveabreakfasteveryday.6.goodlucktoyou.(Str:主+谓+宾)∧isareG(Str：主+系+表)(Sv：主谓一致)(Sv：主谓一致)(A：冠词)(Cap：大写)Cap大写字母capitalletterSp拼写sp

5、ellingSV主谓一致subject-verbagreementStr句子结构sentencestructureVT动词时态verbtenseP标点punctuationA冠词articleWW错词wrongwordNum数(=单数/复数)number(=singular/plural)∧缺成分2.常见错误类型3.改错完善;找出美言交流合作cooperationA.Goodsentences(好词好句）1.___________________2.———————————3.____________________FilltheblanksAHealthyEatingHab

6、itIt’sveryimportantforustohaveahealthyeatinghabit.Butwhatisahealthyeatinghabit?Weshouldeatnoodles,rice,bread,eggsandmilkeveryday.Theygiveusheat.Therearealotofvitaminsinvegetablesandfruit.Scientistsuggestswehavevegetableseighttoeleventimesaweek.Wecaneatfruitseventoninetimesaweek.Ifweeattoom

7、uchfishandmeat,wedon’tfeelwell.It’senoughforustohavefishandmeatthreetofourtimesaweek.Wehadbettereatjunkfoodleast.It’sbadforourhealth.Ifyouwanttohaveagoodhealth,justdolikethis.美文欣赏审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写Howtowritetheexpression?写作技巧小结：认真审题，抓住要点。确定体裁，注意格式。草拟提纲，理清思路。语言规范，