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1、CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02评分标准档次内容语言A55B44C33D22E11F00评分标准1.本题总分为10分,其中内容5分,语言5分。2.评分时应注意的主要方面:内容要点、信息呈现的连贯性和准确性。3.词数超过60，酌情扣分。评分细则内容部分能准确、全面地概括文章主旨大意,并涵盖主要信息。语言部分A.能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。A档给分要求评分标准Moustache（胡子）forCash“Movember”,astheannuale
2、ventisknown,seesmenincountriesincludingtheUK,USandAustraliagrowouttheirfacialhairwhilecollectingsponsorshipmoneyfromfriends,familyandcolleagues,withthemoneygoingtocancercharities.Themonthofnoshavingbeganunofficiallyin2003,whenapairofmenfromAustraliapersuadedtheirfamilytojointhe
3、mingrowingamoustacheinordertoencouragementogetthemselvescheckedforcancer,whichisseenasdistastefulbysomemales.Ayearlater,thegroupdecidedtosetuptheMovemberFoundation,askingfriendsandcolleaguestoofferdonationsofmoneytosupporttheirefforts,andraisedamassiveA$54,000whichwassharedbetw
4、eenanumberofhealthprojects.Withthanksmostlikelytosocialmedia,Movembersoonwentglobalandthefoundationnowoperatesworldwide,havingraisedover￡440millionsince2004.Theeffectsofthefundraisingarewide-reaching,whichhadmadeasignificantdiscoveryinthetreatmentofcancer.Theissueofsomemenbeing
5、tooself-willedtovisittheirdoctorforacheckup,orperhapsbeingraisedinacultureof“toughitout”,hasledsomemalestoneglecttheirhealth,whichmaymeanitcouldbetoolateifsomethingpotentiallydeadlydiddevelop.However,Movemberishelpingtobreakdowntheshameofmalehealthbymakingitmoreaccessible,meani
6、ngthatmenaremorelikelytovisittheirdoctors.Theyfoundawaytoappealtomeninawaythatothercampaignsjustdon’t–withasortofblokey①jokiness.blokey:behavinginawaythatissupposedtobetypicalofmen,especiallymenenjoyingthemselvesinagroup.”“Itssuccessisduetoitswaytohavemenvisittheirdoctorswithbl
7、okeyjokiness.（要点5）MengrowmoustacheformoneyusedforcancercharitiesinMovember.（要点1）In2003,twomenstartedMovember.（要点2）In2004,thefoundationwassetup.（要点3）Sincethenithasgoneglobalandraisedlotsofmoney.（要点4）Movemberisanannualeventwhenmenstopshavingtoraisemoneyforcancercharities.SomeAust
8、raliamenfirststartedittoencouragementodocancerchecksre
