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4、ngtothesurveyconductedlastweek,40%ofthestudentsinourschoollinkhappinesstoalifewithoutworry.Another30%equalhappinesstoachievinggoodgradesinstudyandtherestbelievetruefriends’companyoffersthemastrongsenseofhappiness.Differentpeoplemayhavedifferentinterpretationsofhappinessbasedontheirownlifeexperience
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6、leinneed.Tosomeextent,wealldependonothersinsocietyforahappylife.Oursmallactofkindnesscanmakeabigdifferencetopeoplearound.Bybringinghappinesstoothers,wecangainsuchemotionsasself-esteemandcontentment,whichinturnbringusmorejoy.书面表达评分建议一、评分原则1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2．评分时，可先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确
7、定或调整档次，最后给分。3．少于110词或多于150词的，从总分中酌情减去1-2分。4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、运用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5．拼写和标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6．如字迹难以辨认，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1.简要描述图表内容;2.谈谈你的幸福观及获得
