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1、课程名称：应用文写作之建议信复习内容：建议信基础写作书面表达（满分25分)假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1.邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2.提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等3．祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。一、欣赏与学习（见巩固练习第一题）Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:
2、第一段：第二段：第三段：DearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourC
3、hinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdviceOutline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心
4、人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：RaisetheproblemAdviceWishesFirstpersonPresenttenseLetterDearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.Try
5、yourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswith
6、yourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdviceUsefulexpressions:1.Iamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceon….2.Hereismyadvicefor…3.itisimportanttodosth.4.themore…,thebetter….5.itshouldbeagreatideatodosth.6.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogress.7.Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.8.Firstly,….Secon
7、dly,….Inconclusion,….Learntomakesentences.（见巩固练习第二题）1.我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题，我深感遗憾。（Iamsorryto….）_________________________________________________2.劳逸结合很重要。（combine…with…）________________________________
